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[STDS-802-3-EPOC] comments for review during this week's comment resolution



Duane, TF:

Attached is a file that does a cross reference from our Work Item TBD and Editors Note list (rev 01a)(04/22/15)<http://www.ieee802.org/3/bn/public/wias/workitems_ednotes_3bn_01a_0415.xlsx> document to the latest proposed responses to comments against Draft 1.4 (Listed by clause)<http://www.ieee802.org/3/bn/comments/P802d3bn_D1p4_comments_prop_Cl_b.pdf>.   I would like to review all listed items in this file.

I wanted to do a check to make sure we have all of our TBD and ENs in the work item document addressed by a comment.  For the most part, we are covered.  I noted a few items where an AIP may be needed to get all the relevant localized TBD's, or to be explicit on remedy.  I did find some on the list where I didn't find a comment remedy, hopefully I missed something.

In addition, I would like the following comments reviewed (apologies for any duplications included in the attachment):
3349
3350
3356
3375
3384
3389
3393
3417
3423
3443
3456
3457
3476
3479
3481
3505
3523
3538
3540
3541
3544
3545 (and 3375?)
3546 (AIP to include Kliger_3bn_01_0515.pdf?)
3547
3549
3554
3561
3562
3563
3564
3565
3566
3567 (covers 3546?)
3569
3576
3580
3581
3582
3597
3599

Yours truly,
Mark

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Clause          Page   Line  Comment
1.4	        24	10   3451?
45.2	        27	5    3350?
45.2.1	        32	7    3452
45.2.1.4	33	38   ?
45.2.1.6	35	2    ?
45.2.1.131.2	38	32   3430
45.2.1.131.4	38	51   3433
45.2.1.132.2	39	51   ?
67.6.1		72	28   3524
100.2.8.2	90	17   3570
100.2.9.5.1	100	30   3476
100.2.10.1	106	28   3572 
100.2.10.2	107	24   ?
100.2.12.1	109	9    3523  AIP to remove EN following table
100.2.12.1	109	20   3523 w/AIP
100.6		115	28   3526
101.3.2.1	124	2    3376
101.3.2.1.1	124	37   3435  AIP to remove EN (not in remedy)
101.3.2.1.2	125	3    3436
101.3.2.1.2	125	29   3385
101.3.2.1.2	126	1    3436
101.3.2.1.2	126	12   3377
101.3.2.1.3	126	44   3354
101.3.2.1.4	126	51   3354
101.3.2.1	129	41   3354
101.3.2.5.3	136	26   3375  AIP to remove EN
101.3.3.1.1	147	30   3374  AIP to remove EN, check on EN Line 36
101.3.3.1.2	147	36   3374  w/AIP
101.3.3.3	155	3    3437 / 3528
101.3.3.3.1	155	14   3442
101.3.3.3.1	155	15   3442
101.3.3.3.1	155	25   3442
101.4.1.1	158	12   ?
101.4.1.1.1	158	48   3439
101.4.1.3	160	5    3528
101.4.2.2	162	7    3529
101.4.2.6	165	46   3530
101.4.2.8.2	171	26   3438
101.4.2.8.2	171	30   3531
101.4.2.8.3	172	8    3364
101.4.3.6.1	193	39   3502
101.4.3.6.2	194	36   3447 AIP to do TBD removal on Line 36 and 46
101.4.3.6.2	194	46   3447 w/AIP and add P 195 Line 11
101.4.3.6.2	195	11   3447 w/AIP
101.4.3.6.2	196	6    3504
101.4.3.6.2	196	7    3504
101.4.3.6.2	196	12   3504
101.4.3.7.1	201	8    3365
101.4.3.8.2	201	52   3481
101.4.3.11.1	207	15   3505
101.4.3.11.1	207	44   3580
101.4.3.11.2	208	13   3366
101.4.3.12	208	18   3354
101.5		214	12   3367
101.6		214	18   3506
102.		217	2    3368
102.1.3		220	43   3355
102.1.4.2.1	223	23   3355
102.1.8		225	9    3369   
102.2.3		233	21   3355
102.2.3.1.2	233	52   3355
102.2.5		238	37   3370
102.4.1.2	250	45   3355
102.4.2.9	263	52   3371
102.4.3		265	47   3431  AIP EN is on page 266 Ln 1
102.4.3		265	49   3431
102.4.3		266	1    3431 w/AIP
102.4.4.1	266	25   3357
102.4.4.1	266	50   3507
103.2.2		279	41   3422
103.2.2.1	282	51   3358
103.2.2.1	282	53   3422
103.2.2.3	285	24   3422
103.2.2.4	286	16   3356
103.2.2.4	287	6    3422
103.2.2.7	287	42   3422
103.2.2.7	292	52   3422
103.2.2.7	294	1    3422
103.3.2.4	295	42   3481 AIP, stike "plus <ital>rfOnTimeCapability<ital>" from 6)
103.3.2.4	295	44   3481 see related 3372
103.3.3		295	49   ?
103.3.3.1	299	29   3481 in file
103.3.3.1	299	37   3481 in file
103.3.3.2	300	43   3508
103.3.5.1	313	35   ?
103.3.5.1	313	43   ?
103.3.5.1	314	4    3359
103.3.5.6	318	50   3373
103.4.2.1	331	30   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.2.2	331	47   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.3		332	12   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4		333	10   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4		333	13   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4		333	16   ?  should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
100A.3		347	23   3509
100A.3		347	29   3574
100A.3		348	30   3478


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