[STDS-802-3-EPOC] comments for review during this week's comment resolution
Duane, TF:
Attached is a file that does a cross reference from our Work Item TBD and Editors Note list (rev 01a)(04/22/15)<http://www.ieee802.org/3/bn/public/wias/workitems_ednotes_3bn_01a_0415.xlsx> document to the latest proposed responses to comments against Draft 1.4 (Listed by clause)<http://www.ieee802.org/3/bn/comments/P802d3bn_D1p4_comments_prop_Cl_b.pdf>. I would like to review all listed items in this file.
I wanted to do a check to make sure we have all of our TBD and ENs in the work item document addressed by a comment. For the most part, we are covered. I noted a few items where an AIP may be needed to get all the relevant localized TBD's, or to be explicit on remedy. I did find some on the list where I didn't find a comment remedy, hopefully I missed something.
In addition, I would like the following comments reviewed (apologies for any duplications included in the attachment):
3349
3350
3356
3375
3384
3389
3393
3417
3423
3443
3456
3457
3476
3479
3481
3505
3523
3538
3540
3541
3544
3545 (and 3375?)
3546 (AIP to include Kliger_3bn_01_0515.pdf?)
3547
3549
3554
3561
3562
3563
3564
3565
3566
3567 (covers 3546?)
3569
3576
3580
3581
3582
3597
3599
Yours truly,
Mark
Broadband Technology Group
Broadcom Corporation
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Clause Page Line Comment
1.4 24 10 3451?
45.2 27 5 3350?
45.2.1 32 7 3452
45.2.1.4 33 38 ?
45.2.1.6 35 2 ?
45.2.1.131.2 38 32 3430
45.2.1.131.4 38 51 3433
45.2.1.132.2 39 51 ?
67.6.1 72 28 3524
100.2.8.2 90 17 3570
100.2.9.5.1 100 30 3476
100.2.10.1 106 28 3572
100.2.10.2 107 24 ?
100.2.12.1 109 9 3523 AIP to remove EN following table
100.2.12.1 109 20 3523 w/AIP
100.6 115 28 3526
101.3.2.1 124 2 3376
101.3.2.1.1 124 37 3435 AIP to remove EN (not in remedy)
101.3.2.1.2 125 3 3436
101.3.2.1.2 125 29 3385
101.3.2.1.2 126 1 3436
101.3.2.1.2 126 12 3377
101.3.2.1.3 126 44 3354
101.3.2.1.4 126 51 3354
101.3.2.1 129 41 3354
101.3.2.5.3 136 26 3375 AIP to remove EN
101.3.3.1.1 147 30 3374 AIP to remove EN, check on EN Line 36
101.3.3.1.2 147 36 3374 w/AIP
101.3.3.3 155 3 3437 / 3528
101.3.3.3.1 155 14 3442
101.3.3.3.1 155 15 3442
101.3.3.3.1 155 25 3442
101.4.1.1 158 12 ?
101.4.1.1.1 158 48 3439
101.4.1.3 160 5 3528
101.4.2.2 162 7 3529
101.4.2.6 165 46 3530
101.4.2.8.2 171 26 3438
101.4.2.8.2 171 30 3531
101.4.2.8.3 172 8 3364
101.4.3.6.1 193 39 3502
101.4.3.6.2 194 36 3447 AIP to do TBD removal on Line 36 and 46
101.4.3.6.2 194 46 3447 w/AIP and add P 195 Line 11
101.4.3.6.2 195 11 3447 w/AIP
101.4.3.6.2 196 6 3504
101.4.3.6.2 196 7 3504
101.4.3.6.2 196 12 3504
101.4.3.7.1 201 8 3365
101.4.3.8.2 201 52 3481
101.4.3.11.1 207 15 3505
101.4.3.11.1 207 44 3580
101.4.3.11.2 208 13 3366
101.4.3.12 208 18 3354
101.5 214 12 3367
101.6 214 18 3506
102. 217 2 3368
102.1.3 220 43 3355
102.1.4.2.1 223 23 3355
102.1.8 225 9 3369
102.2.3 233 21 3355
102.2.3.1.2 233 52 3355
102.2.5 238 37 3370
102.4.1.2 250 45 3355
102.4.2.9 263 52 3371
102.4.3 265 47 3431 AIP EN is on page 266 Ln 1
102.4.3 265 49 3431
102.4.3 266 1 3431 w/AIP
102.4.4.1 266 25 3357
102.4.4.1 266 50 3507
103.2.2 279 41 3422
103.2.2.1 282 51 3358
103.2.2.1 282 53 3422
103.2.2.3 285 24 3422
103.2.2.4 286 16 3356
103.2.2.4 287 6 3422
103.2.2.7 287 42 3422
103.2.2.7 292 52 3422
103.2.2.7 294 1 3422
103.3.2.4 295 42 3481 AIP, stike "plus <ital>rfOnTimeCapability<ital>" from 6)
103.3.2.4 295 44 3481 see related 3372
103.3.3 295 49 ?
103.3.3.1 299 29 3481 in file
103.3.3.1 299 37 3481 in file
103.3.3.2 300 43 3508
103.3.5.1 313 35 ?
103.3.5.1 313 43 ?
103.3.5.1 314 4 3359
103.3.5.6 318 50 3373
103.4.2.1 331 30 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.2.2 331 47 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.3 332 12 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4 333 10 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4 333 13 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
103.4.4 333 16 ? should be fixed with PICS, maybe AIP to specifically delete EN?
100A.3 347 23 3509
100A.3 347 29 3574
100A.3 348 30 3478
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