Re: [802SEC] IEEE 802 University Outreach program - draft press release review
IEEE Standards in Healthcare:
http://standards.ieee.org/findstds/standard/healthcare_it.html
Renée
On 5/3/12 1:17 PM, "Pat Thaler" <pthaler@BROADCOM.COM> wrote:
>Editorial suggestions:
>
>The first sentence is rather unwieldy. I'd break it into two: ... in
>standards development. IEEE 802 is developing standards that will
>improve...
>
>That one day's exposure will "engage" students and faculty in standards
>development is overpromising. "introduce" would be more accurate, but
>perhaps I'm just being a conservative engineer and the stronger marketing
>word should stay.
>
>What standards activity do we have that is directed at improving health?
>
>Regards,
>Pat
>
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>[mailto:STDS-802-SEC@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Law, David
>Sent: Thursday, May 03, 2012 6:36 AM
>To: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
>Subject: [802SEC] IEEE 802 University Outreach program - draft press
>release review
>
>Dear EC members,
>
>The IEEE-SA has prepared a press release to announce the launch of the
>IEEE 802 University Outreach program and to publicise the IEEE 802
>University Outreach day at the July plenary.
>
>Since the development of this press release was at my request I'm seeking
>EC approval, however before making a motion to seek endorsement I would
>like to request comments on the draft press release which is attached.
>
>If you can get your comments to me by Wednesday 9th May it would be most
>appreciated.
>
>Thanks and best regards,
> David Law
>
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