Apurva,
I vote Disapprove, but I'll switch to Approve if my comments are resolved:
(1) Where you provide purchasing instructions (Page 2 Line 2), the link points to IEEE Std 802.22. Please correct this; otherwise, people could buy the wrong standard by mistake.
(2) I have some difficulties with the paragraph about IEEE 802 (Page 2 Line 16). Here are my proposed edits (inserts and deletes tagged with <i></i> and <d></d> respectively):
Deployment of technology <d>defined</d><i>specified</i> by the IEEE 802 standard<i>s</i> is <d>already</d> globally pervasive, driven by the ever-growing needs of networks around the world. New application areas are constantly being considered that might leverage the IEEE 802 family of standards in their networks. To better address the needs of all of these areas, the IEEE 802 standard<d> is</d><i>s are</i> constantly evolving and expanding. The success of <d>the</d> IEEE 802 <d>standard</d>—from its inception through today—has been its fair, open, and transparent development process.
Regards,
Roger
On 2013/02/19, at 09:03 PM, Mody, Apurva (US SSA) wrote: Dear EC members, Based on the draft IEEE 802.22.2 Recommended Practice for Installation and Deployment of 802.22 Systems – Standards Completion Press Release that I circulated to the EC a couple of weeks ago, please find attached an updated release which I'm now seeking EC approval for. The changes from my earlier press release language are as shown based on the comments that I received from Stephen McCann and John Ambrosia. Paul has delegated the conduct of the EC electronic ballot on the following motion to me. To ensure this release is issued as soon as practical I am announcing the possibility of an 'early close' to this ballot (see below). Best regards, Apurva Motion ====== The EC supports the IEEE 802.22.2 Standards Completion press release, with editorial changes as deemed necessary. Move: Apurva Mody Second: Bob Heile Start of ballot: Wednesday 20th February Close of ballot: Friday 1st March, 11:59PM AOE Early close: As required in subclause 4.1.2.2 'Electronic Balloting' of the IEEE project 802 LAN/MAN Standards Committee (LMSC) Operations Manual, this is notice that, to ensure the release is provided in a timely manner, this ballot may close early once sufficient responses are received to clearly decide a matter. Dr. Apurva N. Mody Chair, IEEE 802.22 Working Group Wireless Regional Area Networks (WRAN) Mobile: (404)819-0314 ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv. <ieee-802-22-2-press-release-standard-publication_final_before_EC_ballot_sm_ja_comments.pdf><ieee-802-22-2-press-release-standard-publication_final_before_EC_ballot_sm_ja_comments_redlined.pdf>
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