Re: [802SEC] Response to Comments from 802.11 on the 154p title PAR
Jon
Obviously I did not understand what you were trying to convey with your
original comment. I thought you were talking about what was contained in
Section 2.1. Now that I do understand your comment, it is most
reasonable and we will add to 8.1 the sentence: Title is being changed
to more clearly reflect and communicate the intended use of the
standard.
Thanks
Bob
At 05:40 PM 3/18/2013 -0600, Jon Rosdahl wrote:
Hi
Bob,
I understand that MyProject
auto-completes, but the instructions for a Modified PAR is to include in
8.1 the reason for the change..
Please consider adding a statement for what/why
a change was made...
From the PAR instructions:
To modify a PAR you will need to explain the changes you are making, you
cannot modify a PAR without doing this
from NesCom Conventions and
Guidelines:
13. Modified PARs
a. All modified PARs shall include an indication of all changes that are
part of the request under "Additional Explanatory Notes" of the
PAR form.
I would suggest that if you feel that the
auto-fill text in 8.1 is relevant then leave it, but at the very least
you should include a statement that is required for the PAR Modification
explaining what is changing and why.
Regards,
Jon
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Bob Heile
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Sent: Monday, March 18, 2013 6:01 PM
Subject: Re: [802SEC] Response to Comments from 802.11 on the 154p title PAR
Jon
Thanks for the comment on the 15.4p title change:
- 8.1 should only include a statement of what is being changed. i.e. 2.1 Change Title to better communicate what features are in the standard .
- Or something similar.
This was a MyProject auto complete and not something that we had control over. All I entered was the new title and this is the doc that got generated by the system.
Regards
Bob
At 03:52 PM 3/18/2013 -0600, Jon Rosdahl wrote:
Hello WG Chairs!!!
802.11 Has feedback for each of the following PARs:
802 - Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: Overview and Architecture 802.1Qcb - amendment for Frame Replication and Elimination for Reliability -
802.3bm - PAR modification Request
802.3bq - amendment for 40GBASE-T,
802.15.4p - PAR modification Request
802.21c - PAR Extension
Please see feedback as contained in 802.11 doc: 11-13/0333r0:
- https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-0333-00-0000-802-11-review-of-march-proposed-pars.pptx
Regards,
Jon
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