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Slide 18 - Comments on 802.3dg:
1.2 Title – need space between 100 and Mb/s. “100 Mb/s”
1.2 Title – remove “IEEE” from first word.
5.2b – remove unwarranted “PHY” Acronym: suggest change to “Specify additions to and appropriate modifications of IEEE Std 802.3 to add 100 Mb/s Physical Layer
(PHY)specifications and management parameters for operation, and associated optional provision of power, using a single balanced pair of conductors.5.4 – Change “IEEE 802.3” to “IEEE Std 802.3” and add full name to list in 8.1
8.1 list names of standards cited.
CSD: no comments
Slide 19 - Comments on 802-Rev:
5.6 Change “Standards developers within IEEE 802. Manufacturers, distributors, and users of products and services that conform to the LAN, MAN, and PAN standards developed by IEEE 802.”
To
“Standards developers, manufacturers, distributors, and users of products and services that use or conform to IEEE 802 standards.”
Slide 20 - Comments on 802.1Qdt:
2.1 delete “IEEE”
5.2.b Please remove “This amendment also addresses errors and omissions in the description of existing IEEE Std 802.1Q functionality.” this leaves the project open ended. As a compromise change to “This amendment also addresses errors of the existing IEEE Std 802.1Q functionality.”
Slide 21 - Comments on 802.1DU
2.1 should the title not include “Standard for”? Was this PAR form not generated by the myProject tool?
5.4 suggested change “This standard enables communication delays lower than achievable by Bridges and bridged networks solely supporting store-and-forward operations.”
TO
“This standard enables reduced communication delays
lower than achievablebyBbridges and bridged networks solely supporting store-and-forward operations.”The quantitative value of the reduction should be included.
CSD: No Comments
Slide 22-25 - See slide deck.
No Comment
PAR Withdrawal Additional Information:
Change to : “P802.15.6a is an amendment to IEEE Std 802.15.6-2012, which will expire at the end of 2022 without a revision. The 802.15 WG wishes to continue the new project features as part of the new revision project.”
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