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PAR – No comment
CSD 1.2.4 b) Suggest change “bound” with “limits” and delete “, on ether side,” which does not help the sentence clarity.
PAR: 5.5 Change - “PFC is used to avoid packet loss from to congestion,..” to “PFC is used to avoid packet loss from congestion,”
PAR 5.2.b last sentence: Please consider replacing “errors of” with “technical corrections to”
PAR Extension: no Comment
PAR – Number of years seems to be a bit long at 3 years to fix up references.
The Description may need to expand on explaining why 3 years is needed and remember the audience of the paragraph is not the 802.1 group that understands the underlying reasons.
The Document is already at 70%, so please explain what the scope of the changes are that require 3 years.
Given your RevCom target of July 2023, 1 year would be enough, but you could nominally ask for 2 years to buffer.
No Comment
PAR Extension: 2. The text provided does not justify the extension. It just details the normal process of creating a standard. Please provide technical justification for the extension.
The Document is already at 70%, so please explain what the scope of the changes are that require 3 years.
8.3 Initial Participation – The Instructions indicate that 5 unique individuals with unique employers/affiliations are required. Only 4 individuals are listed, but less than 4 unique affiliations.
8.4 Suggest removal of the black text after the “if yes” option as it is not needed ( you replied “no”).
Need to Add to 8.1 the full name of each standard listed in 5.5 Need for project: “IEEE Std 802.15.4w, IEEE Std 802.15.4y, IEEE Std 802.15.4z, IEEE Std 802.15.4aa “
Also in 5.5, you could include the shorthand name in the sentence
“One additional amendment, P802.15.4ab, is currently under development.
Comments from 802.11 on the PARs/ICAIDs underconsideration are posted to Mentor 11-22/0879r2:Regards,Jon-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Jon Rosdahl Engineer, Senior Staff
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