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Re: [802SEC] Dear John // Fwd: +++10-day EC Motion+++ Approval of submission for European Commission RSPG’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”

Dear John,

Thank you very much for your review and constructive comments.  I've talked to the authors of the draft paper and they agree with your proposed change from "will" to "are expected to" and they also decide to move the references after the signature.   Enclosed please find revision 9 of the proposed response for your reference.  It is also updated to the 802.18 mentor.

Regards,
Edward

On Tue, Aug 9, 2022 at 9:35 AM <jdambrosia@gmail.com> wrote:

Edward,

I had unexpected time to further review this.

I would like to change my vote to approve with a suggested editorial –

 

In the second to last paragraph on the first page is the following sentence –

Without doubt, current and next generations of WAS/RLAN technology based on IEEE Std. 802.11ax-2021 [3] and IEEE 802.11be [4] will play a critical role in achieving “Excellent and secure connectivity for everybody and everywhere in Europe,” which “is a prerequisite for a society in which every business and citizen can fully participate” [2].

 

I think this could be better worded so IEEE 802 doesn’t sound so sure of itself.  Something like

Current and next generations of WAS/RLAN technology based on IEEE Std. 802.11ax-2021 [3] and IEEE 802.11be [4] are expected to play a critical role in achieving “Excellent and secure connectivity for everybody and everywhere in Europe,” which “is a prerequisite for a society in which every business and citizen can fully participate” [2].

 

Also – are references typically included in the body of the text or after the signature?

 

John

 

From: jdambrosia@gmail.com <jdambrosia@gmail.com>
Sent: Tuesday, August 9, 2022 8:55 AM
To: 'Edward Au' <edward.ks.au@gmail.com>; STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: RE: Dear John // Fwd: +++10-day EC Motion+++ Approval of submission for European Commission RSPG’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”

 

abstain
From: Edward Au <edward.ks.au@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Jul 29, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Subject: +++10-day EC Motion+++ Approval of submission for European Commission RSPG’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”
To: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG <STDS-802-SEC@listserv.ieee.org>

 

Dear EC members,With this email I would like to announce the start of an LMSC (EC) ballot on a submission to European Commission Radio Spectrum Policy Group (RSPG) in response to the consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”.

Paul has delegated to me to conduct a LMSC (EC) 10-day electronic ballot on the motion below to approve the comments to the ITU-R Working Party 5A.  This EC motion is per IEEE 802 OM 7.2.1 Procedure, P&P 7.1 b) (majority response) and P&P 7.1.2 (2/3 approval of votes cast) for communication with government bodies and public statements.  With that we would like to see everyone respond.

Move to approve document https://mentor.ieee.org/802.18/dcn/22/18-22-0077-08-0000-proposed-response-to-rspg.docx for submission to the European Commission Radio Spectrum Policy Group’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”, with editorial license granted to the 802.18 chair.  
- Approved in the RR-TAG: _13_ / _0_ / _5_ (The Chair did not vote)

Mover:  Edward Au

Seconder:  Dorothy Stanley


Start of ballot: 29 July 2022
Close of ballot: 7 August 2022

Reference document
Information on the public consultation:  https://rspg-spectrum.eu/wp-content/uploads/2022/06/RSPG22-014final-Draft_RSPG_Opinion_WRC23.pdf
- Current deadline for comment submission:  12 August 2022

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