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Re: [802.19] Minutes Posted - 08 Sep 2009 meeting - excellent job - proposed minor corrections



Steve,
 
your minutes are "most excellent".  "awesome." 
 
Near the end you mention:
 
"Tom K. - Sections 4 and 5 may not be sufficient.  He requested that the contribution be listed on what changes were made.  Tom suggested that the contribution numbers and abstracts be added."
 
"Mark suggested keeping the wording less."
 
"Tom K agreed that for this section it may not work."
 
I believe what follows is a more accurate summary, and that the small addition of detail I am proposing adds clarity and value in addition to being accurate ---
 
"Tom K. - Sections 4 and 5 may not be sufficient.  He requested that the contributions which are mentioned as having been submitted to the group be explicity referenced, at a minimum.  Tom suggested that the contribution numbers and abstracts could be added to the sections."
 
"Mark explained that the contributions to the group which are being refered to in these sections, which describe the Technical Feasibility and Economical Feasiblity, were presented as part of the presentations at the tutorial sessions at a previous meeting.  Mark suggested keeping the wording in these sections less."
 
"Tom K agreed that for this section, simply adding the abstracts verbatim may not work."
 
Thank you for your consideration of this suggestion.
 
And again, great job on the minutes. 
 
later, tjk
 
PS
The date in the Header is given as "September 2008".
 
I propose changing this to "September 2009", believing this change to provide a more accurate representation.  I humbly request that you consider this change in addition to those above.


From: Shellhammer, Steve [mailto:sshellha@xxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Tuesday, September 08, 2009 9:00 PM
To: STDS-802-19@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [802.19] Minutes Posted

The minutes from today’s TVWS Coexistence call have been posted,

 

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.19/dcn/09/19-09-0066-00-tvws-tvws-coexistence-sg-conference-call-minutes.doc

 

Steve