Re: [STDS-802-11-EDITORS] 802.11 REVmc MDR kick-off meeting

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Hello Adrian and all,

Attached please find my review of figures and tables.

Regards,
Emily

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Hi All,

Attached is my review of Numbers, Maths Operators and Hyphenation.

Best Regards,

petere

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All –

(To answer Emily’s question)

Your output is a Word document, based on the 802.11 template, that I will cut and paste into a submission. You can use lists, tables, etc… as you wish to record your findings.

The exception is those working with the MIB. They can record their findings either as a tracked changes version of the mib.txt, or as an updated text file. However, if the changes are small in number, I would prefer to see this cut down to show only the changed parts.

The REVmc D3.0 .txt file is there for your convenience to use with AntConc for regular _expression_ searches. You don’t have to use it. Please don’t send me a marked up copy of the .txt file :0).

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

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From: *** IEEE stds-802-11-editors List *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Stephens, Adrian P
Sent: 18 June 2014 18:14
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Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-EDITORS] 802.11 REVmc MDR kick-off meeting

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Thank you all for your participation in the REVmc MDR.

Notes from our meeting are shown below.

All please note that you are signed up for a task of review work. This is due end 2^nd July AOE (anywhere on earth).

I have an action to prepare .txt and MIB documents, which should be available tomorrow. I’ll send an email to this reflector.

Notes:

1. Agenda

a. Discuss the purpose of MDR

b. Briefly review the MDR process documentation -

MDR 11/615r5 Process

c. Style Guide 09/1034r7

d. Peter will present his work groupings

e. Sign up individuals to a work grouping

f. Agree a plan in terms of due date for initial findings, plus a review meeting.

2. Present

a. Yongho

b. Edward

c. Emily

d. Peter

e. Alfred

f. Donald

g. Adrian

3. Apologies

a. Jiamin Chen

b. Dan Gal

4. Issue Tasks

a. MIB/References to MIB - 2 units

i. Compile MIB - process 2.4 item 3 (Yongho)

ii. Check references to MIB (Alfred)

1. Style 2.15

b. ANA/Numbering (Donald)

i. Can check ANA numbering

1. Process 2.4 item 2

ii. Heading/Figure/Table/Equation numbering is probably doesn't need checking

c. Figures/Tables/Equations (Emily)

i. Style of how figure is drawn doesn't match style

ii. Font size consistency / readability

1. Style 2.18

iii. Equations require PHY expertise

d. Hyphenation/math (Peter)

i. Style Section 2.10

ii. Section 2.11 terminology consistency applied

iii. Section 2.10

e. Terminology e.g. frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MSDU (Edward)

i. Style: 2.1.2

ii. Style: 2.8

iii. Style: 2.2

iv. Style: 2.3

f. Terminology - 2 (Jiamin)

i. Style 2.4

ii. Style 2.9

1. Exclude 2.9.2, 2.9.3, 2.9.4

iii. Style 2.13

g. Clause-specific (Dan)

i. Style 3.2 - normative verbs in 4.

ii. Style 3.3

iii. Style 3.5

iv. Style 3.6

5. Planning

a. 2nd July deadline for findings

b. Review meeting

i. 9 am pacific, Friday 11th

6. Tools

a. "antconc" will do regular _expression_ searching on a text file

b. Adrian to provide .txt files for

i. Entire draft

ii. MIB

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

Tel: +44 (1793) 404825 (office)
Tel: +44 (7920) 084 900 (mobile, UK)

Tel: +1 (408) 2397485 (mobile, USA)

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From: Peter Ecclesine (pecclesi) [mailto:pecclesi@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: 18 June 2014 16:59
To: Stephens, Adrian P; STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: 'Gal, Dan (Dan)'; Qi, Emily H; Norman Finn (nfinn); 'Asterjadhi, Alfred'; Yongho Seok
Subject: RE: 802.11 REVmc MDR kick-off meeting

Some information for the call

MDR discussion June 18, 2014

Style Guide 09/1034r9

MDR 11/615r5 Process

Recent MDRs 11/872 aa, 11/873 ae, 11/874 ad, 13/451r2 af

MDR groupings (615r5)

MIB/References to MIB

ANA/Numbering

Figures/Tables/Equations

Hyphenation/math

Terminology e.g. frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MSDU

REVmc Draft 3 3581 pages

Clauses 2, 3 59 pages

4, 5 80

6, 7 416 pages

8 675 pages

9 290 pages

10 330 pages

11, 12, 13 307 pages

PHYs 468 pages

Annexes a, B 196 pages

MIB 486 pages

PHY annexes F, L, S 98 pages

From: Stephens, Adrian P [mailto:Adrian.P.Stephens@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Tuesday, June 17, 2014 6:04 AM
To: STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: Peter Ecclesine (pecclesi); 'Gal, Dan (Dan)'; Qi, Emily H; Norman Finn (nfinn); 'Asterjadhi, Alfred'; Yongho Seok
Subject: RE: 802.11 REVmc MDR kick-off meeting

Dear 802.11 editors,

A reminder to all 802.11 editors that we have this kick-off meeting for the 802.11REVmc mandatory draft review (MDR) tomorrow.

Based on the response at the May session, I think most folks are committed to help with this activity. Thank you all, that should

keep individual tasks to manageable proportions.

Peter is preparing an initial grouping of the work that should take 1-2 days for each group, with the expectation that individuals

will sign up for one of these groups at the prep meeting. If you cannot attend the meeting, but are willing to contribute to the MDR, please

let me know before the meeting.

Here’s what I’m expecting we’ll do tomorrow:

1. Discuss the purpose of MDR

2. Briefly review the MDR process documentation

3. Peter will present his work groupings

4. Sign up individuals to a work grouping

5. Agree a plan in terms of due date for initial findings, plus a review meeting.

The output of the process will be a joint report to TGmc, which will result in changes to REVmc D4.0.

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

Tel: +44 (1793) 404825 (office)
Tel: +44 (7920) 084 900 (mobile, UK)

Tel: +1 (408) 2397485 (mobile, USA)

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From: Stephens, Adrian P
Sent: 10 June 2014 13:45
To: Stephens, Adrian P; STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: 'Peter Ecclesine (pecclesi)'; 'Gal, Dan (Dan)'; Qi, Emily H; Norman Finn (nfinn); Asterjadhi, Alfred; Yongho Seok
Subject: 802.11 REVmc MDR kick-off meeting
When: 18 June 2014 12:00-13:00 (UTC-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada).
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Purpose of meeting:

To create plan, work assignments to perform 802.11 REVm mandatory draft review.

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