Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] TGai Over View for HEW

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Comments:

Slide 3: 3 terms used FILS/802.11ai/initial link setup. Proposed cleaned up slide:

Slide 4: The bullet and sub bullets seems a bit odd. Also "The difference between a portable and mobile station is that a portable station moves from point to point but is only used at a fixed point. Mobile stations access the LAN during movement." - so you mean Mobile not portable in that slide. Cleaned up slide

I would suggest changing the order of slide 3,4,5,6 to 4,5,6,3 - Not done in this attached slide for comparison purposes - recommend to please do so in final slide.

Slide 7 onwards – it will be great if we can add the 3 areas in the heading so that audience can follow the changes. For example, title in Slide 7 may be changed to: “Network and BSS discovery: Scanning procedure changes”

Other comment: Differential link setup procedure is missing and there are too many slides on active scanning.

Thanks

-----Original Message-----
From: Hiroshi Mano [mailto:hiroshi@xxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, November 11, 2013 7:39 AM
To: Santosh Pandey (sanpande); STDS-802-11-TGAI@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] TGai Over View for HEW

Hi Santosh.

Thank you for you comment.

To all

I uploaded 1325-03 as the following, and I would like to use this for HEW SG on PM1 today.

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-1325-03-00ai-802-11ai-improving-wlan-system-performance.ppt

Would you please double check this and let me comment by noon today.

BR Hiroshi

(13/11/12 0:23), Santosh Pandey (sanpande) wrote:

> Hi which one is the current presentation ?

> I see 2 presentations -

> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-1324-00-00ai-tgai-over-viw-current-status.ppt

> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-1325-01-00ai-802-11ai-improving-wlan-system-performance.ppt

> In either case, Slide 6 first bullet should read: "Most of the air time is occupied by management frames" (Probe Request/Response are management frames not control frames)

> Thanks

> S

> -----Original Message-----

> From: *** 802.11 TGai - Fast Initial Link Set-Up *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGAI@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Hiroshi Mano

> Sent: Monday, November 11, 2013 6:42 AM

> To: STDS-802-11-TGAI@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

> Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] TGai Over View for HEW

> Hi Rene

> Thank you very much.

> BR Hiroshi

> (13/11/11 22:41), Rene Struik wrote:

>> Hi Hiroshi:

>> Please find attached the slides used with the presentation in March

>> 2013 for TGaq-TGai. Slides 6, 7, and 8 contain material for FILS

>> authentication with TTP, without TTP, and for piggy-backed info,

>> respectively. The level of detail is in line with other material in

>> the draft HEW material, so can be easily reused.

>> Best regards, Rene

>> On 11/11/2013 4:48 AM, Hiroshi Mano wrote:

>>> Hi Dan

>>>

>>> Would you please add some slide for the protocol sequence with

>>> digital signature authentication.

>>>

>>> BR Hiroshi

>>>

>>> (13/11/11 1:52), Hitoshi MORIOKA wrote:

>>>> Hi Mano-san,

>>>>

>>>> I modified the slide 22 as attached.

>>>> And I suppose the presentation lacks security features such as 1.5

>>>> roundtrip authentication, digital signature authentication.

>>>>

>>>> regards,

>>>>

>>>> (2013/11/06 17:08), Hiroshi Mano wrote:

>>>>> Hi all

>>>>>

>>>>> The following is the link for TGai Over View material for HEW-SG.

>>>>>

>>>>> Would you please review and comment for this.

>>>>>

>>>>> I will do the presentation at HEW SG on PM2 Monday.

>>>>>

>>>>> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-1324-00-00ai-tgai-over-

>>>>> viw-current-status.ppt

>>>>>

>>>>> BR Hiroshi

>>>>>

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