Dear Po-Kai,
A minor comment for CID 3301. The proposed resolution currently says to change “WUR Doze” to “WUR Doze”. I think the second “WUR Doze” should have a lower case
for doze, and should hence be “WUR doze”.
Best regards,
Xiaofei Clement Wang • Principal Engineer • InterDigital
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On Behalf Of Kristem, Vinod
Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2019 11:54 AM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments
Hi Po-Kai,
Thanks for preparing the comment resolutions. Please find my comments below:
For the CIDs 3326 and 3327: The description about ‘non-HT duplicate PPDU’ is a copy paste form the revmd document and they are not applicable to WUR PPDU formats.
For the CID 3021: the comment suggests to remove the repetition of T_{WUR-Sync} definition. As proposed resolution, I suggest to replace the sentence “TWUR-Sync
is the duration of WUR-Sync field,
TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-LDR
if low data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU, and
TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-HDR
if high data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU” with the following
“TWUR-Sync
is the duration of WUR-Sync field, as defined in Table 30-3 (Timing-related constants)”
For the CID 3024: To address the concern of the commenter, I suggest to update the equation (31-11), using the TXTIME in equation (31-16). You can replace equation
(31-11) with the one below
Thanks,
Vinod
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On Behalf Of Huang, Po-kai
Sent: Monday, June 24, 2019 4:16 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments
Dear all,
I have prepared the CR documents for the 130 editorial comments. Please see the link below and let me know if you have further feedback.
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/19/11-19-1025-00-00ba-cr-for-editorial-comments.xlsx
Best,
Po-Kai
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