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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments

Hi Xiaofei,

 

              Thanks for catching this error. I will update the resolution in the next version.

 

Best,

Po-Kai

 

From: *** 802.11 TGba - WUR- Wake-up Radio Operation *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Xiaofei Wang
Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2019 9:06 AM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments

 

Dear Po-Kai,

 

A minor comment for CID 3301. The proposed resolution currently says to change “WUR Doze” to “WUR Doze”. I think the second “WUR Doze” should have a lower case for doze, and should hence be “WUR doze”.

 

 

Best regards,

 

Xiaofei Clement Wang • Principal Engineer • InterDigital

2 Huntington Quadrangle, Melville, NY, 11801 • T: +1 631-622-4028

 

From: *** 802.11 TGba - WUR- Wake-up Radio Operation *** <STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Kristem, Vinod
Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2019 11:54 AM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments

 

Hi Po-Kai,

 

Thanks for preparing the comment resolutions. Please find my comments below:

 

For the CIDs 3326 and 3327: The description about ‘non-HT duplicate PPDU’ is a copy paste form the revmd document and they are not applicable to WUR PPDU formats.

 

For the CID 3021: the comment suggests to remove the repetition of T_{WUR-Sync} definition. As proposed resolution, I suggest to replace the sentence “TWUR-Sync is the duration of WUR-Sync field, TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-LDR if low data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU, and TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-HDR if high data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU”  with the following “TWUR-Sync is the duration of WUR-Sync field, as defined in Table 30-3 (Timing-related constants)”

 

For the CID 3024: To address the concern of the commenter, I suggest to update the equation (31-11), using the TXTIME in equation (31-16). You can replace equation (31-11) with the one below

 

 

Thanks,

Vinod

 

From: *** 802.11 TGba - WUR- Wake-up Radio Operation *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Huang, Po-kai
Sent: Monday, June 24, 2019 4:16 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBA@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] CR document for editorial comments

 

Dear all,

 

              I have prepared the CR documents for the 130 editorial comments. Please see the link below and let me know if you have further feedback.

 

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/19/11-19-1025-00-00ba-cr-for-editorial-comments.xlsx

 

Best,

Po-Kai

 

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