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Hi Guogang, Thanks for your further comments. Please see my embedded response. BR, Duncan From: huangguogang <000017b1384624cd-dmarc-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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This email originated from outside of Qualcomm. Please be wary of any links or attachments, and do not enable macros. Hi Duncan, Thanks for addressing my comments. Please find my further comments attached.
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Duncan Ho <00002b3e54cff3e2-dmarc-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Dear SR TTT members, Happy New Year! Thanks Mark, Mike and Guogang for your review of the draft and all your thoughtful comments. Much appreciated! I just uploaded the R1 of the PDT
here based on all the comments I’ve received so far. Mark, I’ve addressed your comments in the attached “11-24-1881-01-011bn-PDT-mac-seamless-roaming-v5-mgr+DH” and “11-24-1881-00-00bn-pdt-mac-seamless-roaming-mgr+DH-mgr+DH”. Guogang, I’ve addressed your comments in the attached “11-24-1881-00-00bn-pdt-mac-seamless-roaming-HGG+DH”, Mike, I’ve added the “To be done” you suggested. For the sentence about notifying the DS about the DS mapping change, I’m keeping it for now since “DS mapping change” is in the Motion and it is one of the important aspects of seamless
roaming. However, I do understand that we may need to modify it or add clarifications later as we have further discussion on the SR framework and DS mapping updates.
Thanks, Duncan From: Mark Rison <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx>
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This email originated from outside of Qualcomm. Please be wary of any links or attachments, and do not enable macros. - "The non-AP MLD may transmit Class
3 frames to the target AP MLD after receiving the TBD Response frame sent by the current AP MLD." seems meaningless since "after" can mean a very long period and
the non-AP surely will send class 3 frame after it moves under target AP. Maybe the intention is to use "when"? [DH] The sentence specifies the EARLIEST time the non-AP MLD can transmit Class 3 frames so it seems correct to me. Are you saying some may interpret the
“after” can mean a very long time (which is not specified)? That does not seem like a natural interpretation of spec language. Note we cannot use “when” because at the time the Response frame is received, the non-AP MLD may or may not have frames to transmit
immediately. It would be clearer to express this as "The non-AP MLD shall not transmit Class 3 frames to the target MLD until it has received the TBD Response
frame." - "In addition, by this time,
the DS has been notified about the update of the destination mapping for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD." "by the time" is confusing since the sentence above uses "may" so there can be 2 possible cases. [DH] This sentence is a bit problematic. I’ll try to reword it in the next revision of the draft. This appears to be some kind of hidden "shall". The "shall" should be made explicit. Thanks, Mark --
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http://www.samsung.com/uk From: Duncan Ho <00002b3e54cff3e2-dmarc-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Hi Haorui, Thanks for your comments and please see my responses inline below. From: Haorui Yang(Rae) <yanghaorui0217@xxxxxxx>
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This email originated from outside of Qualcomm. Please be wary of any links or attachments, and do not enable macros. Hi Duncan, Thanks for the updated draft. I have the below comment: - "The non-AP MLD may transmit Class 3 frames to the
target AP MLD after receiving the TBD Response frame sent by the current AP MLD." seems meaningless since "after" can mean a very long period and the non-AP surely
will send class 3 frame after it moves under target AP. Maybe the intention is to use "when"? [DH] The sentence specifies the EARLIEST time the non-AP MLD can transmit Class 3 frames so it seems correct to me. Are you saying some may interpret the “after” can mean a very
long time (which is not specified)? That does not seem like a natural interpretation of spec language. Note we cannot use “when” because at the time the Response frame is received, the non-AP MLD may or may not have frames to transmit immediately. - "In addition, by this time, the DS has been notified
about the update of the destination mapping for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD." "by the time" is confusing since the sentence above uses "may" so there can be 2 possible cases. [DH] This sentence is a bit problematic. I’ll try to reword it in the next revision of the draft. Thanks, Duncan BRs, Haorui Yang(Rae) China Mobile ---- Replied Message ----
Hi Duncan,
Thanks for the update. I have two comments: 1) The text I added (To be done: Define the framework for seamless transition needs to be a placeholder in this contribution.) 2) I believe the following text is contentious and should not be included in this draft text at this time (pending the discussion on framework above). "In addition, by this time, the DS has been notified about
the update of the destination mapping for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD" I would suggest that you delete it at this time. Cheers, Mike On Fri, Dec 13, 2024 at 11:59 PM
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