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If there are no volunteers, the editorial team might step in, or they might propose a rejection on the basis
of insufficient detail in the proposed change.
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Owning Ad-hoc
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3383
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"LCI Report", "LCI report", "Location Report", "Location Configuration Information Report", "Location Configuration report"
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Pick one and change the others to that
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EDITOR
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3386
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There is a zoo of terminology: "operating [band]width", "channel [band]width", "operating channel width", "BSS operating width" (and
probably other more esoteric forms)
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Pick one term and humanely kill all the others
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3404
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"Dialog Token" is sometimes missing "field" after
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Add missing "field"s
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EDITOR
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3420
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548.01
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8
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We should not give length information both in text and in figures
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Delete the length info in text and make the figures the sole source of info. Someone volunteered to do this in Waikoloa
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3440
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2.51
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1.5
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Define | (bitwise or), L(bitstring, start, len), , << (shift left), >> (logical shift right), >>> (arithmetic shift right, if used),
Truncate-128, etc. in 1.5 and not repeatedly all over the place
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As it says
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EDITOR
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3452
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"larger than", "more than", "greater than", "higher than"
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Be consistent
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EDITOR
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3453
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"smaller than", "less than"
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Be consistent
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EDITOR
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