Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Various TGmc editorial docs updated

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A clarification…

I will be bringing to motion only those comments that are in the “resolution drafted” state.

These have an empty “Ad-hoc status” field and a non-empty “Resn Status” field.

This excludes 1 assigned, 1 discuss and 20 submission required comments.

At some point I’ll move them into a separate motion tab.

Owning Ad-hoc	Assigned	Discuss	Submission Required	Resolution Drafted	Grand Total
EDITOR	133	1	25	252	411
Architecture	1				1
Editing defect from SB0	1				1
Editorials	1	1	20	209	231
Editorials objected to				1	1
Editorials rejected				21	21
Editorials rework required				8	8
Frame Exchange Sequences	1				1
Frame Formats	77		2	5	84
Inadequate comment			1		1
MAC Management	6				6
MAC Operation	15			1	16
MAC SAP	12			1	13
Other PHY	5				5
PHY SAP				1	1
PICS	1				1
Security	1				1
Terminology	10		2	5	17
VHT PHY	2				2
Grand Total	133	1	25	252	411

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

Tel: +44 (1793) 404825 (office)
Tel: +1 (971) 330 6025 (mobile)

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From: Stephens, Adrian P
Sent: 17 February 2016 12:37
To: stds-802-11-tgm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Various TGmc editorial docs updated

Dear TGmc participants,

I have updated the following based on feedback received:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/16/11-16-0230-01-000m-sb1-stephens-resolutions-part-1.doc

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/15/11-15-0532-33-000m-revmc-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls

The former contains “trivial technical” resolutions. I will bring them to TGmc for review.

The latter contains the following tabs:

Tab Name	Number of comments	Notes
Comments	5134
EDITOR	411
GEN	163
MAC	254
Architecture	1
Editing defect from SB0	1
Editorials	231	Please review by email and let me have any issues. I will move comments from this to “objected to” on request. Absent any feedback, I propose to bring a motion asap to approve these resolutions in due course.
Editorials objected to	1	Will be reviewed in TGmc
Editorials rejected	21	Will eventually be reviewed in TGmc, but with no urgency to allow alternative resolutions to be brought by the commenter(s).
Editorials rework required	8	These are comments that were speculatively edited in D5.1 where subsequent individual feedback has resulted to a change in the resolution that needs to be propagated into the draft. Please review by email and let me have any issues. I will move comments from this to “objected to” on request. Absent any feedback, I propose to bring a motion asap to approve these resolutions in due course.
Frame Exchange Sequences	1
Frame Formats	84
Inadequate comment	1
MAC Management	6
MAC Operation	16
MAC SAP	13
Other PHY	5
PHY SAP	1
PICS	1
Security	1
Terminology	17
VHT PHY	2

Please see “notes” column for my proposed handling of the editorial comments.

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

Tel: +44 (1793) 404825 (office)
Tel: +1 (971) 330 6025 (mobile)

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