Hi, Edward,
So, obviously I need to synch with you on the CIDs I asked to pull from this submission. Here are some quick thoughts. We can coordinate/discuss via email well enough to sort this out, I suspect.
CID 48: A “can” in clause 11 means the 802.11 Standard is giving permission to some device to do this. I don’t think that’s quite what we want here. I know, the previous text said “can”, also … but, it was nestled inside a sentence that started “For example”. By removing that, I think we need to be more careful with the wording. I would suggest changing “can” to “might”. I’m not sure why you (or Graham) wanted to remove the “For example”, though – that seems very clear and appropriate to be here, I think. Maybe “For example, the above procedure could/might be used for IP address configuration.” (I don’t remember what the rules are for using “could” though.)
CID 231: I just wanted to let you know that I think I looked into the issue of not listed Aware window in all the places that needed it, during REVmc. I am in support of getting this wording correct in the Standard, but I need to do a bit of research to convice myself that Mark is right about the split between ATIM window and Awake windows.
CID 238: I support the intention here. But, I thought the proposed changes language was a bit to fuxxy/open to interpretation to just say “Accept.” I’ll try to find a little time to look through the Standard for these references and see if really is that easy, or not.
CID 263: Changing “a single buffered BU” to “a BU” loses the “buffered” adjective. I believe this is needed here, but I haven’t double-checked, yet.
CID 331: This CID has been handled already via a motion this week. I think it should be removed from this spreadsheet to avoid confusion that there is any work to do/that can be done.
Thanks. Mark
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On Fri, Jun 30, 2017 at 2:08 AM, Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
I've uploaded revision 1 of the REVmd EDITOR2 ad-hoc comments at:
[1] 38 of them are processed with "Accepted"/"Revised"
[2] 3 of them are assigned to two volunteers (subject to confirmation)
[3] 1 of them need discussion in the task group
On Sat, Jun 24, 2017 at 6:01 PM, Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
I've uploaded the first update for REVmd EDITOR2 ad-hoc comments, from the Comment Collectio, at:
Among these 42 comments, I've accepted majority of them, revised 3, and awaiting inputs from commenters on the remaining CIDs.
CID 189 needs discussion on a future teleconference or in July plenary.
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