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Hello Mark Your suggested change looks good to me. The comment resolution for CID 1102 will be updated to “Revised”.
Change "Each element is identified by the contents of the Element ID and, when present, Element ID Extension fields as defined in this standard. " to “Each element is identified by the contents of the Element
ID field and, when present, Element ID Extension field as defined in this standard.” Regards, Emily Emily, I have an issue with the resolution to CID 1102. The context is this sentence, “Each element is identified by the contents of the Element ID and, when present, Element ID Extension fields as defined in this standard.” The comment (which you propose we ACCEPT) is that the word fields should not be plural (delete the ‘s’). However, we have no ‘field’ qualifier on the first “Element ID” in the sentence.
The reason “fields” is plural, is because it is referencing both the “Element ID” field and the “Element ID Extension” field. Unfortunately, with the “when present” clause in the middle, it gets hard to make the connection, so I can see the confusion. Can I suggest injecting “field” in the phrase, so each of the fields stands on its own? “Each element is identified by the contents of the Element ID field and, when present, Element ID Extension field as defined in this standard.” Mark From: ***** 802.11 REVm - Revision Maintainance List ***** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Qi, Emily H --- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---
Hello Dorothy and all, I have uploaded the following document with proposed comment resolutions for the EDITOR ad hoc:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0657-00-000m-revmd-wg-lb232-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls. 72 editorial comments are addressed in the tab “Review”. Please review and let me know if you have any question. I plan to have a motion to approve those comment resolutions (72 “easy” editorial comments) in the May IEEE meeting if there
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