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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Updated EDITOR2 comment spreadsheet with two motion tabs (18/0619r4)

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---
Hi Mark,

Thanks for your review.

For your comments on CIDs 1168, 1172, 1173, 1121, 1178, 1186, 1220, 1568, 1230, and 1269, I've updated my resolution and you would refer to 18/0619r5 (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0619-05-000m-revmd-editor2-lb232-comments.xlsx) for the changes.

For your comments on CIDs 1231 and 1232, I've added a comment to Editor/Editor2 to make sure that there is a non-broken space between 1316 and B.  You would refer to 18/0619r5 for the comment too.

For your comment on CID 1118, I believe we do not need to delete "successful ___" in all of the 35 findings.  For example, there is a definition of "successful transmission" in clause 3.2 that I do not believe we have to consider the change.   How about I assign this CID to you for further review/proposed change?

Regards,
Edward 

On Tue, May 1, 2018 at 6:16 AM, Mark Rison <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Thanks for these, Edward.  I have the following comments on the EDITOR2-A tab:

 

CID

Comment

1168

also at 1188.38 and "a MCCA" at 569.20

1172

also at 1401.37

1173

also at  629.50

1121

there are 19 or so instances in other subclauses

1178

not 2860.26 or 2865.25, that's a field not a parameter

1186

also "a SU or MU MIMO
transmission" in 23.3.8.2.2.2.3  and about 23 instances of "a SU transmission"

1118

I get about 35 hits for "successful rece"

1220

not a bracket but a close ceil operator

1568

note F11-22 also has "non-AP/non-PCP" that needs fixing, and also "AP/PCP" ditto.  Also "PCP/AP" in 6.3.92.2.3, "HC/PCP" in 11.4.4.4

1230

don't lose the article "the" (IEEE shouldn't mimic the WFA's illiteracy!)

1231

make sure it's a NBSP (not clear in proposed change)

1232

make sure it's a NBSP (not clear in proposed change)

1269

also dot11RSNConfigDLCGroup in 12.12.2.4.2

 

Thanks,

 

Mark

 

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From: ***** 802.11 REVm - Revision Maintainance List ***** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGM@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Edward Au
Sent: 01 May 2018 06:59
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxx.ORG
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Updated EDITOR2 comment spreadsheet with two motion tabs (18/0619r4)

 

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---

Hi all,

I've uploaded revision 4 of the REVmd EDITOR2 ad-hoc comment spreadsheet at:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0619-04-000m-revmd-editor2-lb232-comments.xlsx

Similar to the EDITOR ad-hoc comment spreadsheet prepared by Emily, I've created the following two tabs:
[1]  "Motion-EDITOR2-A" includes proposed comment resolutions for obvious editorial comments in the EDITOR2 ad-hoc;
[2]  "Motion-EDITOR2-B" includes proposed comment resolutions for 24 editorial comments in the EDITOR2 ad-hoc that were discussed in the April ad-hoc.

Please review and let me know if you have any comment.

Regards,
Edward

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