Hello Mark
Thank you for the review.
See my responses below:
1022: updated.
1162: updated.
1163, 1164, 1165, 1222: since they are overlapping with EDITOR2 comments. I will add a note to each of those comments:
Note to Editor: there might be multiple instances.
1490: updated
1588: I think we may need more discussion on this one. I will pull it out.
1591: updated.
1086: I can pull out this one from the MOTION if you would like to have more discussion.
1115: added: at 700.53 change “an null data packet (NDP) announcement” to “an HT NDP announcement”.
changed “889.6” to “889.61”.
1280: SCs in 12.5.3.3 and 12.5.3.4.3 and 12.5.4.3 are “sequence control”. SC is also used for “MPDU Sequence Control field”. Mark H will work on cleaning up “Sequence Control (SC)” that was added by 11ah. However,
those work items are out of the scope of this comment.
1389: Please see the discussion in 18/0658r4
1433: This is the consensus from the April ad hoc meeting. If you disagree, I will pull out this comment from the group motion. We can have a separate motion on this.
1487: This is the consensus from the telecom. If you disagree, I will pull out this comment from the group motion. We can have a separate motion on this.
1518: This is the consensus from the telecom. If you disagree, I will pull out this comment from the group motion. We can have a separate motion on this.
Regards,
Emily Qi
Thanks for these, Emily. I have the following comments on the EDITOR-A tab:
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1022 |
I find a total of 6 places in the draft |
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1162 |
442.4 not 441.4. Also 1436.32, .54 |
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1163 |
see other similar comment in EDITOR2-A |
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1164 |
see other similar comment in EDITOR2-A |
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1165 |
see other similar comment in EDITOR2-A |
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1222 |
see other similar comment in EDITOR2-A |
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1490 |
also 1536.16, 1537.33 |
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1588 |
The " Move the text in the two paragraphs after Figure 9-84, to be duplicated in 11.3.5.3(k) and 11.3.5.5(k)." part of the accepted proposed change is not clear. Exactly what will 11.3.5
look like after the change? |
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1591 |
Also 916.18, 1428.2 |
I have the following comments on the EDITOR-B tab:
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1086 |
The problem is that now if the spec says "MAC header" it's not clear whether that excludes "PV1 MAC header" |
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1115 |
Also 700.53. 889.6 should be 889.61 |
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1280 |
All the references to "SC" in 12.5.3.3 and 12.5.3.4.3 and 12.5.4.3 need to go too |
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1389 |
The proposed resolution does not address the "when" v. "if" aspect of the comment. Why not accept the proposed change? |
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1433 |
The rejection reason "Uderscores are used for ResultCode everywhere." is broken. A counter-example is given in the comment: "AUTH FAILURE TIMEOUT" |
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1487 |
No, CID 204 said we do need a definition for <PHY> BSS and <PHY> AP, such as those provided for DMG BSS and DMG AP. So the proposed definition for HT AP needs to be added |
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1518 |
Then CID 1188 must be rejected too |
Thanks,
Mark
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Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd update to EDITOR ad hoc comment spreadsheet
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Hello All
I have uploaded an updated REVmd EDITOR ad hoc comment spreadsheet:
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-A” includes proposed comment resolutions for “trivial” editor comments in the “EDITOR” ad hoc.
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-B” includes proposed comment resolutions for “non-trivial” editor comments in the “EDITOR” ad hoc. Those comments were discussed in the April ad hoc and teleconference.
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-A” and Tab “Motion-EDITOR-B” will be considered for MOTION at the Warsaw meeting.
Please review and let me know if you have any other suggestions.
Regards,
Emily Qi
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