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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVme LB273 EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 23/0834r0 is available

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Hello All,

 

I have uploaded doc 23/0834, see: https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/23/11-23-0834-01-000m-revme-wg-lb273-editor1-ad-hoc-comments.xlsx.

 

Doc 23/0834r1 incorporates the feedback from Mark H and Mark R with the following changes:

-          Added CID 4124 to the Trivial tab with the following resolution:

Accepted.

Note to Editor: The location is 243.14. It has the same resolution as CID 4388.

 

-          Updated the resolution of CID 4088:

REVISED.

At 560.63, change "per20bitmap" to "per20bitmap,".

At 551.52, change "(IDLE, [per20bitmap])" to "(IDLE[, per20bitmap])”.

 

Regards,

Emily

 

From: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, May 15, 2023 6:15 AM
To: mark.hamilton2152@xxxxxxxxx; STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVme LB273 EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 23/0834r0 is available

 

Hello Mark,

I will add CID 4124 to the Trivial tab with the following resolution:

Accepted.

Note to Editor: The location is 243.14. It has the same resolution as CID 4388.

 

Thank you!

Emily

 

From: mark.hamilton2152@xxxxxxxxx <mark.hamilton2152@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, May 15, 2023 5:54 AM
To: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>; STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVme LB273 EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 23/0834r0 is available

 

Thanks, Emily,

 

In reviewing, I noticed that my comment, CID 4124, was not included in the “Trivial Editorial Comments” tab.  Likely, this is because I got the page/line reference wrong in my comment.  Please note that this comment should be applied to P243.14, which means it is a duplicate of CID 4388.  I’d suggest we put 4124 (with the appropriate location clean-up in the resolution) on the Trivial tab.

 

Thanks.  Mark

 

From: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Sunday, May 14, 2023 4:59 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVme LB273 EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 23/0834r0 is available

 

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---

Hello Mike and All,

 

REVme LB 273 EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet has been uploaded,

see:  https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/23/11-23-0834-00-000m-revme-wg-lb273-editor1-ad-hoc-comments.xlsx

 

Doc 23/0834r0 includes two tabs:

  1. “All LB273 ED1 comments” includes 71 initial editorial comments in ED1 Ad hoc.
  2. “Trivial Editorial Comments” includes 26 trivial editorial comments with proposed resolutions.

 

I plan to have a motion to approve comments in the tab “Trivial Editorial Comments” on Thursday (5/18).

If you have any questions or believe some of comments in the tab “Trivial Editorial Comments” should be discussed/reviewed in the TGme meeting, please let me know. I would be happy to remove them from the tab “Trivial Editorial Comments”.

 

Thank you!

Emily Qi

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