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stds-802-16: SYSREQ COMMENT:
[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete "This form ... the MAC protocol layer."
[Reason for Edit]
This sentence seems to imply an implementation and not a requirement.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
10
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31
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grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete paragraph.
[Reason for Edit]
The content of the paragraph seems to fall under availability and QoS which
are later in the document. It does not add any requirement and is not very
informative.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
10
[Starting Line #]
36
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grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete paragraph.
[Reason for Edit]
The information is not required.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
11
[Starting Line #]
23
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete lines 23, 24, 25, and 26 up to "ATM standards define..."
[Reason for Edit]
The information is not relevant to what 802.16 is trying to do.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
11
[Starting Line #]
29
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete line 29 and line 30 up to "802.16 protocols..."
[Reason for Edit]
Information is not relevant.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
11
[Starting Line #]
29
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change "SHOULD" to "MUST"
[Reason for Edit]
This is an important service, and like IP and voice, it must be supported.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
11
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32
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete sentence starting with "Thus".
[Reason for Edit]
This requirement is pretty hard to test for. Not really the type of
requirement that the document is trying to highlight.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
12
[Starting Line #]
10
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete section
[Reason for Edit]
There is no requirement in this section.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
16
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22
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete the two sentences starting at "This ..."
[Reason for Edit]
This information is not required.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
16
[Starting Line #]
43
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete sentence beginning with "Note..."
[Reason for Edit]
serves no purpose.
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[Submitter's Last Name]
Guillemette
[Submitter's First Name]
Phil
[Starting Page #]
21
[Starting Line #]
16
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete until line 36
[Reason for Edit]
Integrated Services are not likely to play a very big role, if any at all,
in IP QoS.