RE: stds-802-16: SUB11 Comments to Functional Requirements (Durga Satapathy)

[Brian_Petry@3com.com]

Durga Satapathy's comments below

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Durga
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The BWA system is intended to provide packet, cell and other
transport services.
[Reason for Edit]
To expand the scope of BWA standard.

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Replace
"which are sometimes called interworking functions(IWFs),"
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"and related interworking functions (IWFs),"
[Reason for Edit]
Need to address both interfaces and any interworking functions.

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Change sentence beginning in line 17 to:
"The access transport will be packet based or cell based."
[Reason for Edit]
See no need to limit transport of voice services to packet based.

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Delete the sentence
"Voice connectivity will be provided by a VOIP protocol and may
involve low rate vocoding."
[Reason for Edit]
See no need to limit voice services to VOIP.

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Insert
"3.1.2 ATM Services

The 802.16.3 system MUST provide efficient transport for CBR, VBR (rt
and nrt),
UBR and ABR services."
[Reason for Edit]
To ensure 802.16.3 standard supports ATM-based BWA solutions.


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Change section number from 3.1.2 to 3.1.3

[Reason for Edit]
Above insertion

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Change section number from 3.1.3 to 3.1.4

[Reason for Edit]
Above insertion