stds-802-16: RE: SUB11 COMMENT (2): Functional Requirements Call-for-Comments

[David Trinkwon <trinkwon@compuserve.com>]

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Trinkwon

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David

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "2 to 10Mb/s" to "up to 5Mb/s in either or both directions"

[Reason for Edit]
PAR used 2-10Mb/s to denote the aggregate (shared) channel rate. This part of 
the FRD refers to the capacity delivered to an individual residential or SME 
customer location, and is meant to be comparable to DSL or cable modems in 
realistic wireline deployments

[Submitter's Last Name]
Trinkwon

[Submitter's First Name]
David

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change jitter specification to 20mS

[Reason for Edit]
More realistic requirement for certain forms of implementation.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Trinkwon

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David

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]

In Table 1 :

a) All one-way  delays should be 20ms

b) Delete circuit-based parameters - rest of FRD stipulates packet based
 (and maybe cell based) services only.

c) Change BER 10 - 8 on last line to 10 - 6

d) Add note that MOS refers to 4.5 scale (not 5.0 scale)

[Reason for Edit]
More realistic requirements.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Trinkwon

[Submitter's First Name]
David

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace  "CMIP/CMIS"  with SNMP/CORBA

[Reason for Edit]
More appropriate for Access networks / environments, especially for residential 
and SME markets

[Submitter's Last Name]
Trinkwon

[Submitter's First Name]
David

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete 2nd, 3rd and 4th bullets relating to 802 conformance.

[Reason for Edit]
Not relevant / practicable for FWA/BWA applications for residential and SME 
markets.