[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
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grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Move the words "packet-based" to between the words "provides" and "transport", so that the sentence reads: "The BWA system provides packet-based transport capabilities that can support a wide range of services...."
[Reason for Edit]
To clarify that it is the transport that is packet-based - the services can be anything.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
2
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grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "services" by "services capabilities"
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirements.
Was comment # 149 in last round - Editor said it couldn't be located.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
2
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "services" by "services capabilities"
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirements.
Was comment # 149 in last round - Editor said it couldn't be located.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
2
[Starting Line #]
10
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add a new sentence: "As far as possible, these should be common across the 802.16 systems."
[Reason for Edit]
Commonality improves efficiency.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
2
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21
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grammar, etc.]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
After "The access standards define" please insert "the ways to use"
[Reason for Edit]
Standards do not define technology by rather the way technology is used (e.g., techniques)..
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
2
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23
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grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete the sentence "Other types are under investigation."
[Reason for Edit]
Doesn't add anything to the requirements, unless this investigation will be concluded before the FRs are complete.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
3
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21
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add a reference for the "Five Criteria"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve readability/understanding.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
4
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13
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert the original sentence after the word "protocols": "Specific applications of the 802.16.3 point-to multipoint (P-MP) radios include 2.1 to 3.5 GHz, but the standard is more generally applicable to the range from 2 to 11 GHz."
[Reason for Edit]
Without this sentence that has the frequency range (which was deleted at the meeting #7), the words "in the above range .." in the sentence beginning on line 14 have no meaning.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
4
[Starting Line #]
13
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Modify the sentence to read: "Radio communication in the above range may be possible even in near- and non-line-of-sight situations between a base station and subscriber station."
[Reason for Edit]
Clarify the sentence.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
7
[Starting Line #]
25
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace the words "means to multiplex traffic to and from multiple subscriber stations" by "means to multiplex traffic from multiple subscriber stations"
[Reason for Edit]
This sentence is addressing the upstream direction only.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
7
[Starting Line #]
28
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Propose to replace the title and first paragraph with:
3 Supported Service Capabilities
This section describes typical service capabilities supported by an 802.16.3 air interface.
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirement.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
7
[Starting Line #]
29
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
In the sentence starting "In this document, services refer.....", change the word "document" to "section", and move the sentence to page 9 line 15 , just before "IEEE 802 protocols...."
[Reason for Edit]
This service definition belongs in the Protocols section.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
7
[Starting Line #]
38
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Propose to replace the title and first paragraph with:
3.1 Voice Transport Service Capabilities
802.16.3 systems SHALL support voice communications to subscribers in a way that eases the migration of legacy voice equipment and public switched telephone network (PSTN) access technologies to 802.16.3 systems. The 802.16.3 access transport will be packet based (as opposed to circuit switched) and voice communication will be transported by means of packets.
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirement.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
8
[Starting Line #]
43
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Propose to replace the title and first paragraph with:
3.2 Data Transport Service Capabilities - Internet
The 802.16.3 system MUST directly transport variable-length datagrams efficiently. Both IP versions 4 and 6 must be supported. For efficient transport of IPv6, TCP/IP header compression over the air interface SHOULD be supported. The 802.16.3 IP service MUST provide support for real-time and non-real-time service capabilities. It SHOULD be possible to support the emerging IP Quality of Service (QoS) efforts: Differentiated Services [43, 44] and Integrated Services [42].
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirement.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Costa
[Submitter's First Name]
Jose
[Starting Page #]
9
[Starting Line #]
5
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Propose to replace the title and first paragraph with:
3.3 Bridged LAN Service Capabilities
The 802.16.3 protocols SHOULD support bridged LANS service capabilities, whether directly or indirectly, including always on, ad hoc and on-demand communication in either or both directions.
[Reason for Edit]
To generalize the field of application of the 802.16.3 systems. We need to focus on services capabilities so that operators may build services according to their own market requirement.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Wachira
[Submitter's First Name]
Muya
[Starting Page #]
10
[Starting Line #]
38
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "(with references, etc.)" by "(Questions ITU-R 140/9, ITU-R 215/8, ITU-R 220/9)"
[Reason for Edit]
To provide more specific references.