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stds-802-16: TG1 COMMENT:
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Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change 'Basic Connection IDs' to Basic Connection ID and the NRT management
Connection ID'
[Reason for Edit]
The intention of the Basic connection ID is to provide a shortened unique ID
for an active terminal. Other sections of the document refer to a single
Basic connection ID.
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Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove this parameter
[Reason for Edit]
There is no defined mechanism to identify a subscriber.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change value from 4 to 16
[Reason for Edit]
To accomododate IPv6 terminals
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Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change length from 6 to 8 and Value from Ethernet MAC addres to EUI-64
[Reason for Edit]
Inconsistency
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove 'from the .... the end of the CRC. Remove footnote 2.
[Reason for Edit]
Historical remains
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove 'This value .... the end of the CRC. Remove footnote 3.
[Reason for Edit]
Historical remains
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Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove 'from the .... the end of the CRC. Remove footnote 4.
[Reason for Edit]
Historical remains
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove this parameter
[Reason for Edit]
Relic from times gone by
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove section 2.3.5.6.3
[Reason for Edit]
Inconsistent with rest of document.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change the occurrencies of 48 bit MAC address to EUI-64
[Reason for Edit]
Inconsistency
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add requirement "MAC management messages must not be transported on
transport connections"
[Reason for Edit]
This is kind of implied in the document, but not stated clearly.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add 'Convergence sublayer messages must not be transported on the Basic
Connection ID nor on the NRT Managment CID'
[Reason for Edit]
Implied in the document but not stated clearly
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete 'sorted by CID'
[Reason for Edit]
Sorting the CID makes no sense. Reception order makes more sense but is not
necessarily the most efficient way of doing it.
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
PHY control and MAC control sections should be clearly defined
[Reason for Edit]
Historical remains
[Submitter's Last Name]
Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Move the statement about issueing data grant pendings to section describing
GPC mode.
[Reason for Edit]
Data grant pendings only waste bandwidth for GPT terminals. Also as the
terminal can used bandwidth differently from what the BS has intended the
issuing of grants pending serves no purpose.