The following comments are largely editorial in nature, but do have a technical impact. They have therefore been marked as technical inputs.
...Andy
Andy McGregor, Spectrum Engineering
Wireless Internet & Mobility Systems
+1 (613) 763-7942 (ESN 393), fax: +1 (613) 765-6257 (ESN 395)
mcgregor@nortelnetworks.com
Dept M200, MS 65D/17/C03, Nortel Networks, PO Box 3511, Station C
Ottawa, Ontario, K1Y 4H7, Canada
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert the following paragraph immediately following the (2) sub-heading:
"Each of the carriers individually must pass the single carrier limit above and in addition, the following limits
apply."
[Reason for Edit]
This text was in earlier drafts and appears to have been deleted accidentally.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add this text after line 3:
"Where channel sizes are different, the guard channel should be equal to that of the wider channel system."
[Reason for Edit]
mimics text elsewhere in document, but also needed here for clarity.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "EIRP" with "Power spectral densities"
[Reason for Edit]
it is the spectral density and not absolute power that facilitates coexistence.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add new sentence at end of paragraph:
"Co-location of unsynchronized TDD systems or of FDD systems with TDD systems is problematic".
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text