The following (long) list of comments is believed to be editorial in nature.
Andy McGregor, Spectrum Engineering
Wireless Internet & Mobility Systems
+1 (613) 763-7942 (ESN 393), fax: +1 (613) 765-6257 (ESN 395)
mcgregor@nortelnetworks.com
Dept M200, MS 65D/17/C03, Nortel Networks, PO Box 3511, Station C
Ottawa, Ontario, K1Y 4H7, Canada
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Delete "-" following "Annex D"
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To fix a typo in draft #9
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Insert "regulations" after "local" in text "In the event that local and/or ITU Radio Regulations ..."
[Reason for Edit]
Improved clarity of text
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Delete "s" in "publications" as only one doc is listed
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To fix a typo in draft #9
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replace "Bom = Bo" with "Bom = occupied bandwidth"
replace "Bou = Bo" with "Bou = single carrier occupied bandwidth"
replace "Bol = Bo" with "Bol = single carrier occupied bandwidth"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Insert "total mean" before "power" as in "... = 99.8333% of total mean power."
[Reason for Edit]
Improved clarity of text
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Replace "main emission" with "authorized bandwidth" in "These emissions occur both above and below the main
emission"
[Reason for Edit]
Improved clarity of text
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Delete "at all frequencies over the entire band"
[Reason for Edit]
RPE may be frequency specific, especially since this Practice covers a very wide band
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Insert new acronym "Bo occupied bandwidth"
[Reason for Edit]
define acronym used elsewhere in document
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Replace "CEP" with "CEPT"
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Insert new acronym "TS terminal station"
[Reason for Edit]
define acronym used in document
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Insert "do not" after "waves" in "Electromagnetic waves respect the same geographic... boundaries ..."
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Move "e.g. PCS and cellular phone" to follow "RF transmitters"
Change "is" to "are"
Change section reference to 9.10
So that text reads "... intentional (e.g. RF transmitters, like PCS and cellular phones) and unintentional (e.g. radiated
spurious) sources, which are addressed in Section 9.10."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve readability of text.
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Delete "[marshalled]"
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Delete "in (b)"
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9 - no paragraph (b)
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Insert "," before and after "which was used to substantiate the -6 dB value"
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Insert "," after "cooperative initiative was made"
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Change text to read "... deploy his own system for the maximum use of frequency (i.e. use ..."
Change text to read "... must be employed to facilitate minimum intra-system interference, will contribute ..."
Change text to read "Even the maximum use of frequency in a system does not guarantee coexistence."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Change text to read "... described in Annexes D, E and F."
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #9
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Change text to read "... co-location of FDD base station emitters be considered before trying to improve emission
masks."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Change text to read "Utilize maximum control of subscriber EIRP in accordance ...
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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In Figure 3, the "Out-of-Channel Interferer" graphic has disappeared in changing from a color figure to a B&W
figure - re-insert curve
In Figure 3, the word "interfere" should be changed to "interferer" (two changes)
In description below figure and in many locations throughout document, the word "interfere" should be changed to
"interferer" - recommend selective use of "global replace" command
[Reason for Edit]
To fix typos in draft #9
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Delete "It would be useful to solicit contributions on this topic."
[Reason for Edit]
To fix accidental text in draft #9
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete second decimal place from numbers in column 3 of Table 2.
Insert "+" before "13.5" in row 3
[Reason for Edit]
To fix typos in draft #9
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Insert "for this Practice" as follows "... in coexistence simulations for this Practice are as follows:"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Replace sections 6.1.1.3 and 6.1.1.4 with the following:
6.1.1.3 Repeater Station
There are several possible types of repeaters (see section on System Overview). From the point of view of EIRP
spectral density limits, two recommendations are given, according to the direction faced by the repeater and type of
antenna used. The first recommended limit applies to situations where a repeater uses a sectored or omni directional
antenna, typically facing a number of subscribers - in this case the recommendations in section 6.1.1.1 should be
followed. The second case applies where a repeater uses a highly directional antenna, typically facing a hub or
single subscriber- in this case the recommendations in section 6.1.1.2 should be followed.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text and keep numeric limits in few places.
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Replace paragraph "Therefore, IILS radios ... Section 4.1)" with the following:
"Therefore IILS should follow the recommendations in section 6.1.1.2."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert "transmit" as follows "... to an absolute transmit level below ..."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Emphasize the sub-heading "Note: Unwanted Emission in Europe" by use of sub-heading or bold or underlined
styles.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Insert "for this Practice" as follows "... in coexistence simulations for this Practice are as follows:"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Insert "the" as follows "... consider the antenna radiation pattern ..."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Insert "for this Practice" as follows "... in coexistence simulations for this Practice are as follows:"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete "a" from "... for harsher environments e.g. hurricane-prone areas, a more robust antenna systems may be
required."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Delete sub-heading "6.2.4.4 Additional Consideration"
[Reason for Edit]
Sub-heading has no text attached.
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Replace "minimum" with "planned" in "The minimum allowable degradation in the receiver ..."
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[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "... paragraphs recommend ..." with "... paragraph recommends ..."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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correct spelling of "boundary" and "elevation"
[Reason for Edit]
typos in r9
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Tables 11 and 12 should NOT split across page boundary.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Insert "for this Practice" as follows "... in coexistence simulations for this Practice are as follows:"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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Replace final sentence with "The following sections examine power levels in further detail."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete phrase "... and the process as in Section or Figure[x] should be followed."
[Reason for Edit]
refers to deleted text in earlier revision
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(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
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E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "Section [x]" with "Section 7.1"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "System" to "Systems"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.;
(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert "(see section 5.3)" as follows "... interference mechanisms operating simultaneously (see section 5.3)."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change the final sentence to read:
"Effective frequency re-use between cells will demand the use of antennas whose intra-system requirements can
provide satisfactory inter-system interference levels."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Correct spelling of "interferes" to "interferers" (two places)
Similar correction on p60, lines 20/21
[Reason for Edit]
typos in r9
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McGregor
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Andy
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comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change first sentence to read:
"In practice, sector antennas using FDD that are directed to the same sector should be co-located."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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64
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(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "Due to the nature of lightning ..." with "Since the nature of lightning ..."
Delete "no" in "... do not prevent no failures ..."
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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65
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.;
(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
In the first paragraph, replace "achieve" with "comply with", replace "most of the" with "many", replace "in" with
"for", replace "that" with "in which" and delete "in", resulting in the following:
The two man made EMI effects can be avoided by using good design rules to comply with regulatory requirements
globally in the design of the product. Today, with most of the PCS, cellular, etc. operating in a co-located area, it
would be necessary to comply with the most stringent requirements for immunity stated in many regulatory
requirements. The products should be able to achieve the emission and immunity requirements within its specific
country, but also, for the environment in which the product is intended to be used.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Annexes C, D and E have several sub-sections and needs sub-heading numbers to organize the flow of the text and
needs to have the figures numbered.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Complete reference to input document.
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text
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McGregor
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Andy
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[Starting Page #]
Rebecca Chan Comment Annex D, P92
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comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert "(ref D.11 - D.15)" following "The documents . . ".
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text with explicit cross references.
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McGregor
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Andy
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Rebecca Chan Comment Annex F
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E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "exert" to "excerpt"
[Reason for Edit]
correct typo.
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McGregor
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Andy
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Rebecca Chan Comment Annex F
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comment on a section marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Insert "(ref D.13)" following "SRSP 324.25"
Change "SRSP328.35" to "SRSP325.35", insert "(ref D.14)" following "SRSP 325.35"
Insert "(ref D.15)" following "SRSP 338.6"
Change "RSS 134" to "RSS 191", insert "(ref D.12)" following "RSS 191"
[Reason for Edit]
Improve clarity of text with explicit cross references