Re: [STDS-802-16] Comment 4 regarding draft 802.16 PARs

[Tim Godfrey <tim.godfrey@ieee.org>]

All,

In response to comment (1), The GRIDMAN Task group would like to append
the following text to section 8.1 of the 0030 (802.16n) PAR:

"2.1 Changes in title: Title is being changed in accordance with
the title of the base standard being amended. The title should read as
follows:
Standard for Air Interface for Broadband Wireless Access Systems -
Amendment: Higher Reliability Networks
 
Note that the myProject system may produce an altered version of the
correct title.
"

In response to comment 2, please replace "802.16" with
"802.16.1" in two places in section 5.5, and insert
"IEEE" as the first word of the sentence starting with
"802.16.1 technology is uniquely suitable for these purposes".

Thanks,
Tim.


At 09:49 PM 11/8/2011, you wrote:
> Here are comments from
> 802.11.
>
> For convenience, I've extracted the comments from their referenced slide
> set:
>
> (1) Comments on 802.16n
> 2.1 Title seems redundantly stated.
> ?Repeated text 3 times.  Delete the repetitive text.
> ?Understand that this is not controllable ?
> ?Send note to NesCom Admin to fix it.
>
> (2) Comments on 802.16.1a
> 5.5 - Missing the ?.1? on 802.16 in 2 places.  Missing ?IEEE? in
> front of 802.16 in one place.
>
> (3) Comments on 802.16.1b
> 5.5 missing ?.1? after 802.16 in one place
>
>
> Roger
>
> Roger B. Marks
> <roger@consensii.com>
> Consensii LLC
> <http://consensii.com>
> Chair, IEEE 802.16 Working Group on Broadband Wireless Access
> <http://WirelessMAN.org>
>
>
>
>
>
> Begin forwarded message:
>
> > From: Jon Rosdahl
> > <jrosdahl@ieee.org>
> > Date: 8 November 2011 4:00:56 PM EST
> > To:
> >
> > STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
> > Subject: [802SEC] Comments on Proposed PARS for November
> > Plenary
> > Reply-To: Jon Rosdahl
> > <jrosdahl@ieee.org>
> >
> > Hello 802 EC members,
> >   Comments from 802.11 WG for the following PARS for consideration:
> >          802.16n, 802.16p,
> > 802.16.1.a, 802.16.1b
> >          802.15.9, 802.15.6
> >          802.22b
> > are found in the following file:
> >
> > https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/11/11-11-1530-02-0000-comments-for-nov-2011-ec-par-proposals.ppt
> >
> >
> > We look forward to your response by Wed 5pm.
> > 802.11 will have another PAR review time slot on Thursday 10:30-12:30
> > (AM2) where the 802.11 WG will review your responses.
> > Thanks,
> > Jon
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