Jinweon, Joseph and All,
     
    Few comments:
    1. 
     Typically there is no 1-1 correspondence between data units at 
    different layers.
    For example, most MAC protocols do both fragmentation and aggregation 
    of data 
    units from upper layers. The following terminology is widely used: if 
    we talk
    on 
    certain layer (e.g. MAC), data units of above layer are called MAC 
    SDUs
    (Service Data Units) while data units of this layer are called 
    MAC PDUs
    (Protocol Data Units)
    2. 
    So a reliability indicator for layer X, it should be provided in the 
    terms 
    of 
    errors encountered at the level of SDUs (service data units of this layer). 
    For example,
    Ethernet MAC layer transfers IP datagrams, then the indicator 
    should be error ratio
    of 
    IP datagrams [M/N where N - number of transferred datagrams, M - number 
    of erroneous
    datagrams]. number . There is some problem as the error 
    ratio depends on the datagram
    size, but we can normalize to per-1-bit value.
    3. 
    It seems natural to measure reliability of future 802.20 PHY in the 
    terms of
    error rate for MAC PDUs transported by the PHY. The above 
    comment on normaliztion is applicable. 
    Probably "frames" mentioned by Jinweon are MAC 
    PDUs
    Such definition naturally addresses error ratio "before 
    ARQ" [and other MAC operations,
    for example fragmentation/assembly], but "after FEC" (which is a part 
    of PHY)  
    4. 
    I completely share Jinweon's statement on diversity of services that 
    may result in
    diversity of MAC procedures [enabled/disabled ARQ, restricted 
    delivery delay etc.].
    Then above MAC [e.g. at TCP/IP level] we may have different 
    error ratio with the same
    PHY reliability.
    5. 
    Bottom line: reliability requirements should be first specified for PHY. 
    Then - separately -
    requirements for MAC's error correction capabilities [for example, 
    "MAC should be able to ensure 
    MAC SDUs error ratio not more than 
    X while having PHY SDUs error ratio = Y" Typicaly there 
    
    is 
    a tradeoff between MAC correction capabilities and system 
    latency].
     
    Vladimir
    
      
      Dear Joseph and 
      colleagues,
       
      Thank you for taking your time to 
      work for the requirements.
      But I still have two concerns on the 
      current requirement statement of 
4.1.10 packet error 
      rate.
       
      One:
If I understand the 
      desciption of 4.1.10 subsection correctly,
the mentioned packet errors 
      mean errors over the air.
In this case, packets from the higher layer 
      are segmented usually at MAC 
(Multiple Access Control) layer into 
      frames in a certain size 
for the efficient transmisson over the radio 
      channel.
The terminology of Frame Error Rate(FER) would be better 
      than
Packet Error Rate(PER).
       
      Two:
To my understanding, MBWA 
      system will support diverse services 
of which characteristics can be 
      very different from viewpoint of
delay and error rate.
We can 
      consider, for instance, two services of VoIP and data services.
In case 
      of VoIP service,
FER needs to be tightly controlled below a certain 
      threshold
and retransmission of frames may not be allowed.
In case 
      of data service,
FER can be less strict in order to maximize throughput 
      over the air.
       
      Thus, I would like to propose that 
      the terminology of "Packet Error Rate" in 
subsection 4.1.10 be 
      replaced to "Frame Error Rate" and
that the last sentence in 4.1.10 
      ("The packet error rate for...") be deleted, 
which is also proposed by 
      John Fan and other colleagues in the previous mail.
       
      Best regards, 
      Jin
       
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Jin 
      Weon Chang, Ph. D.
Senior Engineer
       
      Global Standards and Strategy 
      Team
Samsung Electronics Co., Ltd.
Tel: +82-31-279-5117
Pcs: 
      +82-16-384-7017
Fax: +82-31-279-5130
jwchang1@samsung.com
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        Sent: Friday, July 25, 2003 2:44 
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        Subject: stds-80220-requirements: 
        Frame Error Rate Requirement, 4.1.10
        
        Hi All, 
        Here is a revision to the wording on section 
        4.1.10 based on feedback from many of you.  Thanks for the 
        comments. 
  <<frame_error_v0.2.1.rtf>> 
        
Joseph Cleveland 
        
Director, Systems & Standards 
        
Wireless Systems Lab 
Samsung Telecommunications America 
Richardson, TX 75081 
(O) 972-761-7981  (M) 214-336-8446  (F) 
        972-761-7909 
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