Re: [8023-10GEPON] Draft D1.8022 is uploaded - your action is required
Eric,
Please reach an agreement with Frank, using the reflector, by close of
business today. A lack of consensus will result in no changes being made.
Best Regards
Duane
Frank Effenberger wrote:
> Eric, Duane,
>
> On the first underscore error - you are right, but instead of "|", I thought
> the convention for logical OR was the "+". That's how most of the diagrams
> are done. So, I'd change the "_" to a "+".
>
> On the transition leaving LOCKED, that was changed in Effenberger_6 to read
> as it is written now. I suppose you are also right in saying that the
> global transition into INIT also takes care of this. But, it doesn't hurt
> to emphasize the idea.
>
> Frank E.
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eric Lynskey [mailto:eric.lynskey@TEKNOVUS.COM]
> Sent: Wednesday, June 11, 2008 12:23 PM
> To: STDS-802-3-10GEPON@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
> Subject: Re: [8023-10GEPON] Draft D1.8022 is uploaded - your action is
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>
> Everyone,
>
> Figure 92-19 seems to have a couple of errors. In the entrance to LOCK_INIT
> it shows "reset_!signal_ok". This probably should be "reset | !signal_ok".
> Also, on the exit from LOCKED state it does not match up with
> 3av_0805_effenberger_1.pdf. Maybe the transition should be just "EOB_valid
> + persist_dec_fail". There is no need to OR in the signal_ok value since it
> is handled by the global transition into LOCK_INIT.
>
> In 92.4.4.7 there is a reference for item SM4 listed as "Figure 92-XX".
> Since this was new text, perhaps it could be changed to the correct value.
> I believe the figure should be 92-22.
>
> Eric Lynskey
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Glen Kramer [mailto:glen.kramer@TEKNOVUS.COM]
> Sent: Friday, June 06, 2008 12:56 PM
> To: STDS-802-3-10GEPON@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
> Subject: [8023-10GEPON] Draft D1.8022 is uploaded - your action is required
>
> Dear Colleagues,
>
> I am glad to announce that our editors once again have demonstrated
> remarkable endurance and perseverance whereby through long hours and many
> iterations they produced the draft D1.8022 on time.
>
> The draft is now uploaded to our website. You may access it at
> http://www.ieee802.org/3/av/private/drafts.html
>
> Please, note that D1.8022 is a preliminary draft. As we discussed at the May
> meeting, the P802.3av draft will be submitted by July 3rd for working group
> review in anticipation of starting the working group ballot in July. Since
> the 802.3av task force will not have a chance to meet before our draft is
> submitted, we are taking an additional step this time to verify that all the
> changes in D1.8022 were implemented precisely according to the comment
> resolutions recorded in
> http://www.ieee802.org/3/av/public/2008_05/3av_0805_comments_d1_3_accepted.p
> df.
>
> Please, review the posted documents (marked-up version) and, if you find any
> material not consistent with an approved comment resolution, or a
> newly-introduced error, sent a message to editors and to the reflector.
> Remember that at this stage we should only focus on latest changes made by
> editors. Do not submit new comments to fix remaining issues or make
> improvements. We will have till Wednesday, June 11th to review the
> preliminary draft. (It will be editor's discretion how to address your
> feedback.)
>
> On Friday, June 13th, the editors will publish the final version (D1.8023)
> of the draft. This version will be submitted to WG for preview. At that time
> we will start our normal commenting cycle against the D1.8023. We will
> resolve these new comments at the July meeting.
>
> Please, let me know if you have any questions about the process or schedule
> ahead of us.
>
>
> Thank you,
> Glen
>
> _______________________
> Glen Kramer
> Chair, IEEE P802.3av "10GEPON" Task Force
> glen.kramer@ieee.org
>
>
>
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