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Minor comments - suggesting a slightly different text change – simply editorial, so that it reads correctly (inserted text shown by
underline) Instead of:
"PDs may also adjust their maximum required operating power below PClass_PD or PClass_PD-2P
(when dual-signature PD operates over 2-pairs)
by using Autoclass (see 145.3.6.2)."
"PDs may also adjust their maximum required operating power below PClass_PD (or PClass_PD-2P
when a dual-signature PD operates over 2-pairs)
by using Autoclass (see 145.3.6.2)." I think this just makes it clearer, however, the next change is more important editorially (and,could get you comments if not made) I would make is rather than say “above equation” in 145.3.8.4, you should refer to the Equation number (as a cross reference). Saying “above
equation” puts you at the mercy of an editor or framemaker moving the equation around relative to the text. -george From: Yair Darshan [mailto:YDarshan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Hi guys, Please see attached. I’ll appreciate your review. Thanks Yair
Darshan Yair Chief R&D Engineer Analog Mixed Signal Group Microsemi Corporation 1 Hanagar St., P.O. Box 7220 Cell: +972-54-4893019
E-mail: <mailto:ydarshan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>. |