RE: [802SEC] +++Approve Response to FCC FNPRM
Approve with editorial comments.
1. 3rd paragraph of letter, "support" -> "supports" similar verb agreement
problems in: 1. "operate" -> "operates", last paragraph of 2.2.1 "propose"
-> "proposes", 3. "welcome" -> "welcomes",
2. "Committee" is defined as LMSC, yet it is also used for 802.11.
References to WGs should be "committee", two occurrences observed in 1.4.
3. 2.1.1 First line -- space on wrong side of comma.
4. page 4 footnote, "3Comm" should be "3Com"
5. signatures "WirelessPersonal" -> "Wireless Personal"
--Bob Grow
-----Original Message-----
From: Jim Carlo [mailto:jcarlo@ti.com]
Sent: Sunday, July 15, 2001 7:11 PM
To: IEEE802
Subject: [802SEC] +++Approve Response to FCC FNPRM
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SEC OFFICIAL EMAIL BALLOT 802.0/15JULY2001
Issue date: 15Jul2001Closing Date: 28Jul2001
Moved By: Roger Marks
Second By: Vic Hayes
Move: to submit document RR-01-012 as Comments to FNPRM 99-231. Objects
between square brackets are subject to change to reflect the reality.
Document RR-01-012 r0 contains the items between square brackets, worked out
according to the actions taken in the WGs and the SEC. It also has taken the
effect of the dot15 amendment into consideration. Revision marks can be made
visible.This is the version that will be submitted by Vic Hayes and I (note
both Vic and I will send the document together - I will add my coordinates).
The attached zip file contains document 11-01-391 r7. This is the version
according to the motion to amend made in dot 15
Wireless working group Chairs are expected to poll their groups on these
comments within 10 days.
<<SEC-blt.zip>>
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Vic Hayes
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