Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] limiting fragmentation IEs to a single frame
Hi Yunsong,
Unfortunately the motion was made yesterday. If you feel there are some
improvements to be made in the text please make a formal comment and we
can address it.
regards,
Dan.
On 5/16/13 11:01 AM, "Yangyunsong" <yangyunsong@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>Hi Dan,
>
>If I may make a comment on the last sentence in section 8.4.2.1 before
>you motion r3:
>
>"If present, the Fragment IE appears after another Information element
>that it is fragmenting."
>
>#1. my understanding is that a Fragment IE can also follow another
>Fragment IE. The sentence above can be interpreted as conflicting with
>that.
>#2. "another" is grammatically wrong since there is "that..." describing
>the "Information element".
>
>So, I would like to suggest the following sentence to replace it:
>
>"If present, one or more Fragment IEs appear after the Information
>element that is being fragmented."
>
>Thank you.
>Yunsong Yang
>Huawei Device USA Inc.
>10180 Telesis Court, STE 165
>San Diego, CA 92121
>Phone: +1-858-754-3638
>
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>Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] limiting fragmentation IEs to a single frame
>
> Hello,
>
> Discussion surrounding the adoption of 11-13/0478r2 requested a further
>clarification that fragmented IEs will be limited to a single frame.
>Since that 11-13/0478r2 has already been approved,
>11-13/0478r3 merely proposes the addition of a clarifying sentence to the
>already-adopted text about restricting fragment IEs to a single frame.
>
> Hopefully we can motion and adopt this tomorrow.
>
> regards,
>
> Dan.
>
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