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Yunsong original in blue Mark r1
Comments in red. Yunsong responses are in
green. Mark r2 responses in purple. For CID 6514,
First, there is a typo in the original text. There should be a space between “Info” and “ID”. Second, technically speaking, when the composite
of the CAG is changed (e.g. an Info ID is added, deleted, or changed), the CAG Number shall also be increased by 1 so that the STA may query the advertisement server to find out what has been changed. That is why “Info ID” should be kept. Therefore, I recommend
that resolution to CID 6514 be:
I don't think an Info ID is changed, it's the information carried in an ANQP-element identified by that Info ID which is changed, right? So I think a better resolution would be to make the sentence say simply:
The CAG Version is incremented every time YY> The intent of the original text is to indicate that any change in the value or the presence will cause the CAG Number
to increase. Now I noticed that “the presence” is already mentioned earlier in the sentence. So, I agree with you that “or Info ID” is redundant and should be removed. I will recommend that resolution to CID 6514 be “Accepted.”. Separately, the accepted resolution
to CID 6884 will change “are” to “is”. So, that should satisfy you. Thanks. OK, so I think this would result in:
The CAG Version is incremented every time the value of, or presence of, an element within the CAG of the associated advertisement protocol is added, deleted, or changed. However, this still doesn't really work, because the "value or presence" of something can’t be added or deleted, only changed. So I think it needs to say either:
The CAG Version is incremented every time or:
The CAG Version is incremented every time the value of, or presence of, an element within the CAG of the associated advertisement protocol is
However, I would just like to check: deleting the "ANQP-" from "ANQP-element" to leave just "element", as in 14/1507, means that we're no longer talking about ANQP-elements (identified by Info ID) here but talking about what were called information elements (identified by Element ID). Is that correct? YY> The CAG Number doesn’t just apply to ANQP-element only. It has been extended to other advertisement protocols, such as PADP. PADP is an 802.11aq thing, right? Then it's not in scope of 802.11ai. So, the sentence was made advertisement-protocol-neutral. However, the CAG Number doesn’t apply to regular information elements. In 11-14-1507r2, under 8.4.2.172,
there is a sentence defining “The Common ANQP Advertisement Group (CAG) is a group of elements that are defined by the same advertisement protocol”. Since no regular information elements are defined by any advertisement protocol, the TG thought it was clear
enough. Hm. I can see a D4.0 comment, but OK for now! Mark -- Mark RISON, Standards Architect, WLAN English/Esperanto/Français Samsung Cambridge Solution Centre Tel: +44 1223 434600 Innovation Park, Cambridge CB4 0DS Fax: +44 1223 434601 ROYAUME UNI WWW:
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On Behalf Of Yangyunsong Hi Marc and all, I just I just realize that I have been assigned to two comments.
For CID 6495,
The commenter is of the opposite opinion of Adrian Stephens (CID 6012) regarding if we should describe a receiver’s behavior when receiving a non-compliant
frame. In San Antonio F2F meeting, the TG has indicated the preference of adopting resolution in CID 6012 regarding this point. Therefore, I recommend that resolution to CID 6495 be:
For CID 6514,
First, there is a typo in the original text. There should be a space between “Info” and “ID”. Second, technically speaking, when the composite
of the CAG is changed (e.g. an Info ID is added, deleted, or changed), the CAG Number shall also be increased by 1 so that the STA may query the advertisement server to find out what has been changed. That is why “Info ID” should be kept. Therefore, I recommend
that resolution to CID 6514 be:
Thanks, Yunsong Yang Huawei Device USA Inc. 10180 Telesis Court, STE 165 San Diego, CA 92121 Phone: +1-858-754-3638 From: *** 802.11 TGai - Fast Initial Link Set-Up *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGAI@xxxxxxxx]
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