Thanks for this, Antonio.
Some comments:
- "is an
bit mask octet that
" is duplication of the figure defining the element.
Delete
- What does "IP" mean in "Out of band
IP request"?
The abbreviation does not
appear in
Subclause 3.4.
In any case, it's not clear to me what it's
telling me, even if it means "Internet Protocol" (does it mean it has
to be IPv4 or IPv6?)
- "Note" should be "NOTE"
- "one Negotiation Method"
should be "one negotiation method"
- Do we have some general comment to deal with the fact that
"an EBCS" needs to be expanded to "an EBCS traffic stream" (or
better "an EBCS stream" or "an EBCS flow") throughout?
- Does "EBCS request by STAs that are not associated with the broadcaster"
imply that you
shall not use this method if you are associated?
(It doesn't imply
that you shall use this method if you are not associated, since
otherwise methods 0 and 3 could never be used.)
Do we have some
behavioural text associated with this?
Thanks,
Mark
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Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGBC] CR 1091
Dear all,
I have committed a new version of the contribution addressing the conflict between CR 1091 and 1451 (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0581-02-00bc-conflict-1091-1451.docx)
and the excel with the resolution for CR 1091 (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0661-00-00bc-cr-1091.xlsx), no need to modify resolution for 1451.
Marc, if possible we can have a look at the AC.
Br
Antonio
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