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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBE] Editorial change for doc 1272r1



Hello Abhi,

Thanks for your input.   Yes - it is an editorial change to move your introductory paragraph to subclause 33.1.14 that is more appropriate.   I will update it prior to the release of D0.1.

Regards,
Edward

On Sun, Sep 13, 2020 at 8:52 PM Abhishek Patil <appatil@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Edward,

As we discussed on the PDT review email thread, I would like to make a request to move the contents from clause 33.3.1 to 33.1.14.

I noticed you have created a dedicated subclause for Multi-BSSID (33.3.14). This is helpful since we can describe all operations related to Multiple BSSID set and Co-Hosted set under this clause. I wasn’t aware of this when I prepared the PDT doc (1272). And as a results, I had proposed to add the text on MBSSID under the ‘General’ clause.

In my opinion, the following text would be more appropriate under 33.1.14:

 

I believe this change is editorial. Could you please help update the 11be draft spec to reflect this change?

Regards,
Abhi

 



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