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> CID 1301: At 996.29, "48-(MaxBSSID indicator field)" should be "(48 - MaxBSSID Indicator field)" and the hyphen should be a minus Oh, and there shouldn't be a space in "Max BSSID" at 1075.56. Mark --
Mark RISON, Standards Architect, WLAN English/Esperanto/Français Samsung Cambridge Solution Centre Tel: +44 1223 434600 Innovation Park, Cambridge CB4 0DS Fax: +44 1223 434601 ROYAUME UNI WWW:
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Thanks for these, Emily. I have the following comments: CID 1092: I think we should reinstate the list. Otherwise the remaining sentence says nothing about the subclause topic, namely "Key management" CID 1102: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) CID 1115: Need to fix also at 889.61 and 1917.12 and 1917.29 (also fix case) and 1918.16 (also fix case and change "indicator" to "subfield") CID 1122: Also at 4142.65 and 4142.38 CID 1257: Is this really just an editorial? CID 1301: At 996.29, "48-(MaxBSSID indicator field)" should be "(48 - MaxBSSID Indicator field)" and the hyphen should be a minus CID 1502: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) CID 1582: Agree with Mark H that we need consistency for the NOTE in T21-1. But it adopt the proposed change, need to fix case of the "present" to "Present" in the resulting "MU = present
once […]" CID 1622: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) Thanks, Mark --
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Hello Dorothy and all, I have uploaded the following document with proposed comment resolutions for the EDITOR ad hoc:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0657-00-000m-revmd-wg-lb232-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls. 72 editorial comments are addressed in the tab “Review”. Please review and let me know if you have any question. I plan to have a motion to approve those comment resolutions (72 “easy” editorial comments) in the May
IEEE meeting if there is no further question. Regards, Emily Qi To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-11-TGM list, click the following link:
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