Hi Stephen –
I have a question on the proposed resolutions.
When you state in the resolution for 4096 that “RLQP is transferred” is the noun missing should it be “RLQP frame is transferred”?
When you state in the resolution for 4097 “in GAS Query Requests and GAS Query Responses” is the noun missing should it be “in Gas Query Request frames and GAS Query Response frames”?
Regards,
Joseph
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any thoughts, comments on these two CIDs below?
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CID
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Clause Number(C)
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Page(C)
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Line(C)
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Comment
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Proposed Change
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4096
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11.23.3.4
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2432
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57
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What is a "protected Action frame"? Should this be a "Protected Dual of Public Action frame"? If that is true, then isn't the decision about whether RLQP is protected or
not up to the regulatory domain, as opposed to the protocol (i.e. RLQP) itself?
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Change the sentence "When RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it uses protected Action frames, but does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames"to"When
RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames. In some regulatory domains, RLQP may use Protected Dual of Public Action frames"
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Updated proposed change:
REVISED
"When RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames and in some regulatory domains might use Protected Dual
of Public Action frames."
and the next sentence (2432.60) is:
"In some regulatory domains, the GDD enabling STA might be required to have a secured connection with the RLSS.”
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CID
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Clause Number(C)
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Page(C)
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Line(C)
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Comment
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Proposed Change
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4097
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11.23.3.4
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2432
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53
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The start of this sentence is incorrect "The RLQP payload contains RLQP-elements", as it is GAS that contains RLQP-elements.
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Change the start of the cited sentence to "The GAS payload contains RLQP-elements"
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Updated proposed change:
"RLQP-elements are contained in GAS Query Requests and GAS Query Responses”
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