Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] CIDs 4096 and 4097

[Stephen McCann <mccann.stephen@xxxxxxxxx>]

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Dear all,

            thanks for the feedback on these two comments. I've revised my submission 11-20-0820r2:

<https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-0820-02-000m-gas-and-rlqp-comments-proposed-resolutions.doc>

and I'll ask for agenda time to consider them on a future call.

Kind regards

Stephen

On Wed, 24 Jun 2020 at 11:49, Stephen McCann <mccann.stephen@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Dear all,

           any thoughts, comments on these two CIDs below?

Kind regards

Stephen

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CID	Clause Number(C)	Page(C)	Line(C)	Comment	Proposed Change
4096	11.23.3.4	2432	57	What is a "protected Action frame"? Should this be a "Protected Dual of Public Action frame"? If that is true, then isn't the decision about whether RLQP is protected or not up to the regulatory domain, as opposed to the protocol (i.e. RLQP) itself?	Change the sentence "When RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it uses protected Action frames, but does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames"to"When RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames. In some regulatory domains, RLQP may use Protected Dual of Public Action frames"

Updated proposed change:

REVISED

"When RLQP is transmitted between the GDD dependent STA and its GDD enabling STA, it does not use Ethertype 89-0d frames and in some regulatory domains might use Protected Dual of Public Action frames."

and the next sentence (2432.60) is:

"In some regulatory domains, the GDD enabling STA might be required to have a secured connection with the RLSS.”

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CID	Clause Number(C)	Page(C)	Line(C)	Comment	Proposed Change
4097	11.23.3.4	2432	53	The start of this sentence is incorrect "The RLQP payload contains RLQP-elements", as it is GAS that contains RLQP-elements.	Change the start of the cited sentence to "The GAS payload contains RLQP-elements"

 

Updated proposed change:

REVISED

 

"RLQP-elements are contained in GAS Query Requests and GAS Query Responses”

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