Re: [STDS-802-16] release of IEEE P802.16e/D3
Hello Roger, Ron,
I would like to point out additional editorial error.
The implementation of contribution C802.16e-04_70r3, has error in
implementation of the following instruction: "(4) REPLACE section
'8.4.6.2.4.2 Partitioning of subcarriers into subchannels in the uplink"
with the following text"
In D3, the change was implemented as:
"[REPLACE section "8.4.6.2.4 Partition a subchannel into
mini-subchannel" with the following text:]"
I believe that this is an error, and should be fixed procedurally.
P.S. Generally, I think that all comments of type 'replace section'
which deals directly with TGd material should be rejected (and
procedurally excluded from the current working document) since it is a
strict violation of the existing (and even modified) PAR. The commenter
should be instructed to make changes in a backward compatible fashion.
Thanks,
Itzik.
-----Original Message-----
From: owner-stds-802-16@listserv.ieee.org
[mailto:owner-stds-802-16@listserv.ieee.org] On Behalf Of Roger B. Marks
Sent: Wednesday, June 09, 2004 8:21 AM
To: STDS-802-16@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-16] release of IEEE P802.16e/D3
Dear Mr. Ryu,
Thanks for calling this issue to my attention.
Our editors are quite busy and can easily make an error, particularly
when multiple versions of contributions are submitted. I'm sure that
the TGe editor, Ron Murias, will take a look to understand what
happened.
It will not be possible to correct any editorial errors at this time.
However, D3 is subject to recirculation. It would be appropriate to
raise your point as a ballot comment. Given the situation you
described, this could be accepted as an editorial comment at the July
session so that the correction would be included in D4.
Regards,
Roger
>Hi, Roger
>
>I found an editing error in P802.16e_D3.
>At last session, I presented a contribution number "C802.16e-04_73r1",
>and it was accepted.
>But P802.16e_D3 is applied with C802.16e-04_73 which I uploaded
>before session.
>I uploaded revised contribution in local server "INBOX" during session.
>I would like you to check and correct it.
>
>Thanks
>
>Best Regard
>
>Kiseon Ryu
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: owner-stds-802-16@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
>[mailto:owner-stds-802-16@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG]
>Sent: Tuesday, June 08, 2004 1:32 AM
>To: STDS-802-16@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
>Subject: [STDS-802-16] release of IEEE P802.16e/D3
>
>
>[I sent this note on June 1, but it seems that some people did not
>receive it.]
>
>The new draft P802.16e/32-2004 ("Draft Amendment to IEEE Standard for
>Local and Metropolitan Area Networks- Part 16: Air Interface for
>Fixed and Mobile Broadband Wireless Access Systems- Amendment for
>Physical and Medium Access Control Layers for Combined Fixed and
>Mobile Operation in Licensed Bands") is now available:
> <http://ieee802.org/16/private/drafts/tge/P80216e_D3.zip>
>
>This is the third draft in the P802.16e project. It is available
>using the 802.16 user name and password. For more information on
>password-protected access, see:
> http://ieee802.org/16/password.html
>
>Thanks to editor Ron Murias for the great work!
>
>Ron has also provided a Commentary database, including editor's
>notes, from the Working Group Recirc Ballot #14a that led to this
>draft:
> <http://ieee802.org/16/docs/04/80216-04_23r3.zip>
>
>Working Group Recirculation Ballot #14b, with this draft under
>review, will follow shortly.
>
>Cheers,
>
>Roger
>--
>
>Dr. Roger B. Marks <mailto:marks@nist.gov> +1 303 497 3037
>National Institute of Standards and Technology/Boulder, CO, USA
>Chair, IEEE 802.16 Working Group on Broadband Wireless Access
> <http://WirelessMAN.org>