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Glenn, Marc,
Good and easy to read document. Some comments:
- 1.2 IEEE 802.17 MAC Service
I would specify which 3 parameters are mandatory
- Table 3 DSCP Mapping
I would add a comment that this is a default mapping, but not the only one possible, vendors could choose to add configuration commands to re-map differently
- Table 4 EXP mapping
Same comment as for Table 3
- 3.2. Should we say more about control of the ringlet selection? For example a mechanism for MPLS TE backup tunnel (or any other diverse routing path) placement through mapping into the opposite ringlet to the one MAC would select?
From: owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Ghanwani, Anoop
Sent: Monday, July 18, 2005 10:41 AM
To: STDS-802-17@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: Re: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftHi Glenn,I think it would really help readability if you can find away to put the PHB names in...just maybe in parenthesisor even on the line following the DSCP. All that isneeded is something like:110000 - EFxxxxxxx - AF11, etc.Otherwise, the reader would be forced to have a copy ofthe DiffServ RFC handy in order to understand this table.Yes, a clarification with respect to what the tableapplies to is needed. In fact, you might need a secondtable to talk about L-LSPs since they encode 3 levelsof drop precedence in the EXP bits for AF which thenneed to be mapped to the 2-levels supported in 802.17.I think it would be better to reword the security sectionas follows."This draft does not introduce any new security concernsfor IEEE 802.17 networks. Some of the existing vulnerabilitiesof IEEE 802.17 networks include: ...".Anoop
From: owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Glenn Parsons
Sent: Monday, July 18, 2005 9:38 AM
To: STDS-802-17@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: Re: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftAnoop,On Table 3 we could not really fit the PHB in the ASCII table without making it look too squished, so it was left out.On LSPs, do you simply want to note that mapping applies to E-LSPs?And the security section is intentionally thick since we cannot say there are no risks. But perhaps the line you are looking for is the second sentence in item 4 which should be the closing paragraph of section 7.Cheers,Glenn
From: Ghanwani, Anoop [mailto:anoop.ghanwani@hp.com]
Sent: Thursday, July 14, 2005 4:57 PM
To: Parsons, Glenn [CAR:1A14:EXCH]; STDS-802-17@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: RE: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftHi Glenn, Mark,In Table 3, I think it would be useful to also havethe PHB name alongwith the DSCP since theDSCP values are hard to remember...e.g.000000 (BE), xxxxxx (AF11) ,etc., in the firstcolumn of the table.In Sec 5.1.1, I think a distinction needs to be madefor E-LSP and L-LSP. With L-LSPs only the dropprecedence is encoded in the EXP bits.I'm curious as to why the draft has such a detailedsecurity considerations section even though by itselfthe draft doesn't introduce any new security concerns.At a minimum, I think a statement to that effect shouldappear in the security section.Anoop
From: owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Glenn Parsons
Sent: Tuesday, July 12, 2005 6:16 PM
To: STDS-802-17@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: Re: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftThanks David,We can fix most of these I think.Some of them though (e.g., the sections with no section numbers) are part of the IETF front/back matter and cannot be changed (without changing their style).Cheers,Glenn.
From: David V James [mailto:dvj@alum.mit.edu]
Sent: Tuesday, July 12, 2005 7:36 PM
To: Parsons, Glenn [CAR:1A14:EXCH]
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Subject: RE: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftGlen,I got of a few of the excessive capitalization, but I suspectnot all.The 802.3 environment seems very hazardous: everyone there seemsto get a sticky caps key(:>).Its on the attached pdf. Feel free to discuss, call me into themeeting, or forward as appropriate.DVJDavid V. James
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From: owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-17@ieee.org]On Behalf Of Glenn Parsons
Sent: Tuesday, July 12, 2005 1:36 PM
To: STDS-802-17@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: [RPRWG] IPoRPR initial draftFolks,
The first draft of the IPoRPR basic mapping is attached.
This version is slightly different from the IETF officially posted version <draft-ietf-iporpr-basic-00.txt> -- there are some minor corrections to tables 2 & 3. As a result, I'd prefer the group reviews this version.
Note that the primary review mechanism to submit comments to the IETF IPoRPR mailing list -- and you must be a member to post (and get past the spam filter :-).
There is currently no plan for an IPoRPR WG meeting at IETF 63 in Paris.
However, there is agenda time at the IEEE 802.17 meeting in San Francisco next week to discuss this draft.
Cheers,
Glenn
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