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I find “George1” much clearer. Regards _________________________________________________________ Distinguished Engineer 170 West Tasman Dr. Enterprise Networks San Jose, CA, 95134, USA. Wrk: +1 408 525 6952 Mob: +1 408 315 8024 Email: petejone at cisco.com Web:
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_________________________________________________________ From: Tremblay, David <david.tremblay@xxxxxxx> Hi George, Thank you for providing the two text options for consideration.
My preference is to go with the George1 text. Regards, David Tremblay From: Bob Voss <Bob.Voss@xxxxxxxxxxx> George, Thanks for this effort. I am a fan of option “George1”. Bob From: George Zimmerman <george@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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the sender, and know the content is safe. << All – at the PDCC meeting, I took the action item to propose a rewrite of the statement below, so it did not require careful parsing of a comma to indicate that that the requirement referred to all external paired conductor cables with
a diameter of 0.4mm: Chad: PSE circuits connected to external paired conductor cable, such as those described in Table 13 of IEC 62368-1, having a minimum wire diameter of 0,4 mm shall have the current limited to
not more than 1,3 A. I ended up with 2 versions, which I was arguing with myself over, and between Chad and Geoff they each preferred one or the other for the same reasons. Hence, please provide your insight &/or preference: George1: this one goes for 2 shorter sentences, easier to parse for non-native speakers (or to translate); however, it is a bigger change in the actual text: PSE circuits connected to external paired conductor cable having a minimum wire diameter of 0,4 mm shall have the current limited to not more than 1,3 A. Examples of such cables are described
in Table 13 of IEC 62368-1. George2: this one makes a smaller text change, just moving an existing clause within the sentence to avoid the comma-break. However, it is a complex sentence, more difficult to parse: PSE circuits connected to external paired conductor cable having a minimum wire diameter of 0,4 mm, such as those described in Table 13 of IEC 62368-1, shall have the current limited to
not more than 1,3 A. George Zimmerman, Ph.D. President & Principal CME Consulting, Inc. Experts in Advanced PHYsical Communications 310-920-3860 George Zimmerman, Ph.D. President & Principal CME Consulting, Inc. Experts in Advanced PHYsical Communications 310-920-3860 To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-3-PDCC list, click the following link:
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