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Re: [STDS-802-16] [TGm] Editorial comments in SDD commentary DB, revision 1

Title: [TGm] Editorial comments in SDD commentary DB, revision 1

Wookbong,

 

I am afraid you will have to blame me, not poor Shkumbin.

 

As I indicated in my prior email reporting on the reclassification of some of the comments, we were unable to resolve these comments definitively as ‘SDD Cleanup – PHY’, so they were changed from ‘PHY: MIMO’ to ‘out-of-scope’.

 

I have just talked with Ron Porat and he has assured me that the comments can be correctly reclassified as ‘SDD Cleanup – PHY’. Roger is making the tag reclassification changes to the following comments right now:

397, 403, 406, 411, 412, 413, 415, 416, 417, 418, 420, 421, 422, 423, 426, 427, 428, 429, 430, 431, 433, 434, 435, 436, 440, 441, 444, 451, 452, 453, 454, 455, 456, 460, 461, 463, 464, 608L

 

I apologize for the confusion on this matter.

 

Regarding your note on the Editorial comments:

3, 115, 419, 446, 457, 459

These comments will be removed from the set for block approval via motion and resolved individually.

 

Thanks,
Phillip Barber
Chief Scientist
Wireless Advanced Research and Standards
Huawei Technologies Co., LTD.

 
Rapporteur Group Chair Coordinator, IEEE 802.16 TGm

From: Wookbong Lee [mailto:wbong@LGE.COM]
Sent: Wednesday, September 10, 2008 8:28 PM
To: STDS-802-16@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-16] [TGm] Editorial comments in SDD commentary DB, revision 1

 

Dear Shkumbin,

 

Thanks for your effort, I think it was very hard work for you to put all the tag.

 

I would like to clarify some of comment related to MIMO section which you marked as out of scope but I think that is in scope since this is for newly accepted text output from the Rapporteur Groups in Session #56, primarily in Section 4, 6, 8, 10 and 11.

 

Comment # 397, 403, 406, 411, 412, 413, 415, 416, 417, 418, 420, 421, 422, 423, 426, 427, 428, 429, 430, 431, 433, 434, 435, 436, 440, 441, 444, 451, 452, 453, 454, 455, 456, 460, 461, 463, 464

 : These comments can be classified into “SDD cleanup PHY” (deleting or modifying some text in the SDD.)

 

And the following comments are I think technical comment (currently marked as editorial.)

Comment # : 3, 115, 419, 446, 457, 459

 

BR,

Wookbong Lee

 

From: Shkumbin Hamiti [mailto:shkumbin.hamiti@NOKIA.COM]
Sent: Thursday, September 11, 2008 5:45 AM
To: STDS-802-16@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: [STDS-802-16] [TGm] Editorial comments in SDD commentary DB, revision 1

 

Dear colleagues,

I have just uploaded the Rev 1 of the SDD commentary DB, the IEEE 802.16m-08/034r1. You can find it here: http://dot16.org/ul//upload/TGm_db/802.16m%2d08_034r1.zip

This revision contains one file that I had missed in the first upload and few other files that were uploaded late.
In addition, and quite important, you will find a classification of comments. Please note that for those comments that had no classification by the author I have assumed a certain tag. I expect that there may be some misallocations, so I kindly ask you to check and if you disagree please let me know and I will correct it.

There are 160 editorial comments, and as usual there will be a motion to approve all of them in a batch. Since we would like to have this motion proposed quite early in the session I kindly ask to check the comment numbers below and let me know if you disagree on any of those.

Here is the rough text that will be proposed as a motion:

To accept the following list of comments in the IEEE 802.16m-08/034r1:
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 11, 13, 14, 15, 19, 21, 30, 37, 38, 42, 44, 51, 91, 111, 112, 115, 117, 118, 119, 120, 121, 124, 125, 126, 127, 128, 129, 130, 131, 132, 133, 134, 135, 136, 137, 139, 141, 143, 144, 146, 148, 150, 151, 152, 153, 154, 155, 157, 167, 168, 173, 174, 176, 177, 178, 180, 182, 183, 184, 185, 186, 190, 191, 192, 193, 196, 197, 200, 201, 204, 205, 206, 208, 209, 210, 211, 213, 214, 215, 216, 217, 219, 222, 223, 226, 228, 230, 232, 234, 235, 239, 246, 252, 254, 256, 258, 259, 260, 265, 274, 289, 290, 304, 305, 308, 316, 319, 336, 339, 340, 342, 345, 346, 347, 348, 349, 360, 361, 362, 363, 364, 365, 366, 367, 372, 373, 374, 376, 378, 379, 380, 381, 382, 384, 387, 388, 400, 405, 419, 432, 445, 446, 457, 459, 465, 469, 475, 525, 543, 576, 578, 579, 596,

and authorize the editor to implement those changes in the next issue of the SDD

Kind regards,
Shkumbin Hamiti
SDD Editor